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  1. Tirloque


    Well, as my assistant previously highlighted, her eyes still have an unnatural feel to them. So, the demonic influence hasn't completely disappeared. Which is btw also enforced by the daedra protagonist treating her differently than she does to Nessa. : « That's a bad idea then. 'cause if you show your pee-pee to everyone as if you wanted to honey-honey, everyone's gonna believe you're wanting to. Even those you don't want, you see ? »
  2. Strange how violent a text can get without actually depicting the fight. Intense, powerful storytelling here, with impeccable style. Now the scenario is merely started, and as the British say, « proof of the pudding is in the eating ».
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    And here goes another one ! Liked how the daedra girl tricked them, not to mention that with your new setup, any outfit looks... erh... impressive, to say the least (probably what distracted Nessa, I believe ? ^^). So scenario wise, this was short but interesting (though not sure the second soul within Gwen will get hypnotized as well). And technically, massive sex scene afterwards, with a well though combination of highres pics and fluid gifs. Good work ! Malicia : « I get that that lady daedra had trouble finding clothes 'cause she's too tall. But she
  4. Thanks. Considering the work one goes through to pull a story of that level, giving constructive criticism is the least I can do. But Arrgh is an onomatopoeia by itself. And you ended up reusing it a lot in this episode. You varied it once in the whole entry, but quite sucessfully. I would vary more in your stead, but I agree that's a matter of style. We did indeed. I think better overdo it (lots of images but clear) than the contrary. Story do convey events, and so your message should be delivered as closely as possible than your inner idea. Thank you for the
  5. Interesting chapter. Overall, you risked yourself into infrequently explored areas (a new vampire's education, multiple characters fights, a non-Nora entry with side character development), and so that made the entry sometimes a bit clumsy, sometimes quite mesmerizing, as the implications of Thomas and Hannah newfound relationship are unknown for the readers. Starting by the imperfections you're not at ease with onomatopoeia (a bow breaking wouldn't sound like a bandit getting stabbed, yet in both case we get an Arrghh ! ). Don't be afraid to use comics-like onomatopoeia, t
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    Well, sometimes readers are not there, sometimes readers who think to show their appreciation aren't. Likes and views are always somewhat random, unless you've got a really high count of active followers. Yet, I agree, the graphics are cleaner, and as you've toned down your comic layout towards a more fullscreen scroll approach, it puts the emphasis on presence and immersion. Which is excellent, I must say, with remarkable character outer design and custom background. It's really immersive. Story-wise, you've complexified it to something more interesting than just a falmer capture wi
  7. Catching up with the DCI ! Still the impressive custom object mashup -> photoshop edits for the effects. I understand better your "Nolan" approach to effects : I create the impact by visualizing it, but you achieve same if not more dramatic impressions by putting the accent on the result. As for the events themselves, flavorful sexual content, but stopped from going overboard by a good pace management. Still loving the humor (the pervert player one and the goblins talk being two of those that cracked me up ). Great chapter ! 👌 'kay so now, I gotta take a look at what Crw and A
  8. Malicia : « You're very welcome. Though I'm not sure about the limit thing : If there was a place called pits of endless defilement, with people pushing things to the limit, I very wouldn't go there to begin with. 'cause if it's endless, then going to the limit gonna take a very long time, you see ? » Ah, so it was that comment. Well considering how refreshing your DCI series currently feel, I'm flattered ! You're probably right. Yet Photoshoping entirely external objects into an image takes s
  9. No Imgbox technical issues today, though I remember episodes of some of my uploads taking time to display. And what a display here ! I'm shocked by the amount of violent effects on this one ! The pics with the barbarian going full hack 'n slash were amazing, specially considering that (with some exceptions) your specialty was humor rather than action. That berseker rage was brutal ! And visually great, not even sure photoshopping images with & without actors would've provided better results. Equally time consuming though (possibly more), but it makes sense you did the models with ingame co
  10. Quite entertaining once more (with the typo indeed echoing with the future summoning, and being a funny twist ^^). The dialogues, though of a certain length, were fluid in a very fluid and reactive fashion, which made them quick an easy to read. Appreciating the everlasting humor (saw what you did with the title ) about the pumps, the NPCs behavior, and Skyrim's world whereabouts, since they're a mix of the game's absurd sides but turned into derision by a realistic revisit. Nice chapter ! Malicia : « That Sian gal is very right about pumps. There are people who wear them in Skyri
  11. Same here, more combat poses = better. Plus as Torundr hints it, I guess we'll get a hands on demonstration with the next TFOA acts !
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    The Lady from Bruma

    Hmm, appreciable length on this one ! And what's even better, is the way you kept surprising the reader with Lady Marianna's doings, from her very first sentence till the last. And so what was supposed to be an escort entertaining the usual guys while a not too bright spouse awaits, became an unexpected FF scene, with a unexpectedly witted and human protagonists. Great chapter ! 👌 Malicia : « I'm very not sure, no. Some people, they get the right boobies surgery, then they kiss the right people on the pee-pee, and then they get all what they want. That
  13. Hey Isamushin. No problem with up to two videos a week, it's a common occurence for authors to publish their works by batches of one or two. And you could publish other two just later on the same week. The thing is not to publish a bunch at once, as it means the other bloggers who released their work just before would've turned unlucky. ^^ Anyway, we all began one day as newcomers, didn't we ? In the name of the Storytellers, I thank you for you understanding. Have a good stay on LL.
  14. Gaa, I'm in perfect agreement with myself ! Malicia would be so proud of me. 🤩 She also has the confirmation her precious advices are indeed stored, as you said in Aithne's. ^^ Jokes aside, I remember I did read a chapter where Sian was getting transported the same way, as it seemed to be a restart of the plot, and so a good chance to get an idea without starting from the very first episodes. Funny to see my criticism was close to current. ^^ Anyway, we'll see if I can get to read a larger sample this time, considering I've got some chapters of advance regar
  15. That's a completely legit point. Malicia : « I very guessed it, 'cause I'm very intelligent, yes. »
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