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Adrea: Enchanting Evening


djregs

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Everyone!

 

I feel like a HUGE WEIGHT has been lifted off my chest and am ready to start posting again.  The plan is to have 2 longer stories out this month (this is 1 of them the other is a Halloween Story).  This story has been in the planning for a long time, so I hope you enjoy!  

 

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I also regret to inform you that Adrea will be keeping her clothes on in her next few stories.  

 

Adrea:  Enough is Enough!  I’m not taking them off everytime I do a story!!! Get a new gag!  

 


 

 


 

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That was a dirty chapter ?. My poor, innocent eyes! Nice entry!

 

 

I think for my personal taste I'd prefer less of the onomatopoeia/ asterisked descriptions. They can be great for drawing people's attention to important stuff or emphasizing details that are hard to convey purely visually but I find that if there are too many they sort of become visual background noise and lose their impact or become a bit annoying. Just my two cents though. 

 

 

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51 minutes ago, wilson99 said:

Adrea what a body she's got thank you for this girl ?

Glad you enjoyed!

 

18 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

That was a dirty chapter ?. My poor, innocent eyes! Nice entry!

 

I think for my personal taste I'd prefer less of the onomatopoeia/ asterisked descriptions. They can be great for drawing people's attention to important stuff or emphasizing details that are hard to convey purely visually but I find that if there are too many they sort of become visual background noise and lose their impact or become a bit annoying. Just my two cents though. 

I can see that!  Particularly in the bedroom scene.  For the bar scene, I'd be hard pressed to find another way to portray it without text boxes everywhere.  With out a little bit of description, seems lifeless.  

 

Also your eyes will recover... in time ;-)

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I like your entries. Every picture is colorful, contain various poses and funny/ interesting dialogues. Agree with my Prince: masturbation scene was awesome. :)

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Maylin: I haven't been naked in a story yet... Not in story but Master posted something for Eva, Ivy and Prince for making them wait too long on their request to see me ah huh you know... (whisper) Do the nasty.... Well good to see you out of writer's block. Good show!1744856077_Maylin09042019026.jpg.36159eb6c6b6eaad2f61220d9aff03fa.jpg

 

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10 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Good one. Loved masturbation scene.

Glad you enjoyed it!

10 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

I like your entries. Every picture is colorful, contain various poses and funny/ interesting dialogues. Agree with my Prince: masturbation scene was awesome. :)

Thanks Eva!  :-)

5 hours ago, Jayomms said:
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Maylin: I haven't been naked in a story yet... Not in story but Master posted something for Eva, Ivy and Prince for making them wait too long on their request to see me ah huh you know... (whisper) Do the nasty.... Well good to see you out of writer's block. Good show!1744856077_Maylin09042019026.jpg.36159eb6c6b6eaad2f61220d9aff03fa.jpg

 

Holy Selfies, Batman!  Maylin looking hot!  I remember when Jayomms used to only speak emoji!  Happy you liked it!

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1 hour ago, Nuka Raider69 said:

Aria: Daedra for the win!

 

Nice work

Thank you!  

 

Adrea:  Daedra?! DAEDRA?! WHERE?!

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9 hours ago, Jayomms said:
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Maylin: I haven't been naked in a story yet... Not in story but Master posted something for Eva, Ivy and Prince for making them wait too long on their request to see me ah huh you know... (whisper) Do the nasty.... Well good to see you out of writer's block. Good show!1744856077_Maylin09042019026.jpg.36159eb6c6b6eaad2f61220d9aff03fa.jpg

 

She is gorgeous :)

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Ahhh... And just I thought that she ll have some good ol banging =(
But still, thats an intereting turn of events ^_^ Great job ^_^

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4 hours ago, Crw said:

Ahhh... And just I thought that she ll have some good ol banging =(
But still, thats an intereting turn of events ^_^ Great job ^_^

Honestly, Adrea wishes that happened that night.  Too bad she met someone more interesting ;).  

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A nice chapter once again. Like the ambiance, both visually and storywise, it makes your story peculiar in their own way. As for the onomatopoeia/captions, you certainly use a lot of them, and it indeed adds some information (about movements and sounds in particular). But while Spy is right about not overdoing it ; I also believe it's a question of style, as some comic makers do want to transcribe more info/sounds than the others.

 

Here is one example where you could've reduced the number of *whirls* to 3 or 4 without changing your style :

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Here's another where you could've replaced the onomatopoeia by drawn comic effects :

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Anyway, I'm not saying that you should remove your onomatopoeia as they clearly add something (specially in your setting), but that ideally, an author should wonder in each case if the onomatopoeia/caption is worth it, and if it can be replaced by visual effects before indeed going for it. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

Regardless, interesting twists in this chapter (Adrea in fact training in the bars, the newcomer being an enchanter). Compliments for him for remaining unaffected in front of a fully naked Adrea masturbating, btw. ^^ Had fun reading this. :D

20 hours ago, djregs said:

Holy Selfies, Batman!  Maylin looking hot!  I remember when Jayomms used to only speak emoji!  Happy you liked it!

Malicia : :open_mouth::classic_laugh::mrgreen::thumbsup:

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Malicia : « A YEAR ?? Smiley-ryoandr-HFR.gif

 

             And I who though you acted like a boss while you didn't honey-honey for a year ! You gonna end up like Tabi if that goes on, uh. :classic_excl:

             I'm very good about that though, so if you need expert advice about it I can very help you. :classic_lightbulb: »

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12 hours ago, Tirloque said:

A nice chapter once again. Like the ambiance, both visually and storywise, it makes your story peculiar in their own way. As for the onomatopoeia/captions, you certainly use a lot of them, and it indeed adds some information (about movements and sounds in particular). But while Spy is right about not overdoing it ; I also believe it's a question of style, as some comic makers do want to transcribe more info/sounds than the others.

Anyway, I'm not saying that you should remove your onomatopoeia as they clearly add something (specially in your setting), but that ideally, an author should wonder in each case if the onomatopoeia/caption is worth it, and if it can be replaced by visual effects before indeed going for it. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

I think you both bring up good points!  I'm just not as practiced using either methods as I could be.  It's something I'll examine in the near future!  

 

12 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Regardless, interesting twists in this chapter (Adrea in fact training in the bars, the newcomer being an enchanter). Compliments for him for remaining unaffected in front of a fully naked Adrea masturbating, btw. ^^ Had fun reading this. :D

For Adrea, it was an insane night of worst first impression imaginable.  

For Enchanteur, it was Tuesday...  He might be able to pass on a thing a too about the strange world he's chosen for himself.  Glad you enjoyed!  

 

12 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « A YEAR ?? Smiley-ryoandr-HFR.gif

             And I who though you acted like a boss while you didn't honey-honey for a year ! You gonna end up like Tabi if that goes on, uh. :classic_excl:

             I'm very good about that though, so if you need expert advice about it I can very help you. :classic_lightbulb: »

Adrea:  Malicia... Are you offering advice on how to pick up guys?  Because if so... help me!  I'm stuck on an island full of dark elves who either tolerate me or don't know I exist.  

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8 hours ago, djregs said:

Adrea:  Malicia... Are you offering advice on how to pick up guys?  Because if so... help me!  I'm stuck on an island full of dark elves who either tolerate me or don't know I exist.  

Malicia : « Dark elves ? Then, it's more complicated, yes. I gonna see what I can do. :classic_ph34r: »

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3 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Dark elves ? Then, it's more complicated, yes. I gonna see what I can do. :classic_ph34r: »

@djregs - You made terrible mistake. You asked wrong girl how to pick guys. Malicija cares only for her Caramel and sisters. She is still a virgin. You better ask her how to start a monastery. :P

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11 hours ago, ther1pper said:

Very interesting, can't wait to see him show up again.

You'll get your wish soon!  Just as soon as I can get the next few posts up!

4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Dark elves ? Then, it's more complicated, yes. I gonna see what I can do. :classic_ph34r: »

Adrea:  Please hurry! :worried:  

4 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

@djregs - You made terrible mistake. You asked wrong girl how to pick guys. Malicija cares only for her Caramel and sisters. She is still a virgin. You better ask her how to start a monastery. :P

Adrea:  You must be teasing poor Malicia again, Prince!  Especially after she was so nice to you in her last entry!  :tounge_wink:

 

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26 minutes ago, djregs said:

Adrea:  You must be teasing poor Malicia again, Prince!  Especially after she was so nice to you in her last entry!  :tounge_wink:

 

I don't know if you know that I tease those I love. :D  Malicija is my favorite person to tease, just as Lidija is to my wife, Ivy. :)

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12 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

@djregs - You made terrible mistake. You asked wrong girl how to pick guys. Malicija cares only for her Caramel and sisters. She is still a virgin. You better ask her how to start a monastery. :P

7 hours ago, djregs said:

Adrea:  You must be teasing poor Malicia again, Prince!  Especially after she was so nice to you in her last entry!  :tounge_wink:

6 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

I don't know if you know that I tease those I love. :D  Malicija is my favorite person to tease, just as Lidija is to my wife, Ivy. :)

Malicia : « He's being very saucy 'cause he's very jealous I didn't marry Stranger, no. :classic_sleep:

 

               But like I know he is, I stay very calm and very composed.

 

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7 hours ago, djregs said:

Adrea:  Please hurry! :worried: 

Malicia : « I've already sent the advices. The letter should arrive very soon, yes. :classic_angel:»

 

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Miss Adrea, of the Sylphs ? I have a letter here for you - your hands only:

 

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There was also this. She said it was an elf potion, not sure what she meant by that.

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Looks like that's it. Got to go.

 

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1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Miss Adrea, of the Sylphs ? I have a letter here for you - your hands only:

 

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There was also this. She said it was an elf potion, not sure what she meant by that.

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Looks like that's it. Got to go.

 

A-MAZ-ING! I'm feeling a little inspired thanks to this.  Just give it a month so I can get through this backlog!  :wacko:

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6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « He's being very saucy 'cause he's very jealous I didn't marry Stranger, no. :classic_sleep:

 

               But like I know he is, I stay very calm and very composed.

 

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You're are very wrong. I'm not jealous because of that. Eva wanted them to get married. I resent Malicija for running away in the middle of the sex just because she was caught buy old orc. :P

A tip for Malicija: Never, and it is unexceptional rule: never leave in the middle of sex. :D

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8 minutes ago, Elf Prince said:

You're are very wrong. I'm not jealous because of that. Eva wanted them to get married. I resent Malicija for running away in the middle of the sex just because she was caught buy old orc. :P

A tip for Malicija: Never, and it is unexceptional rule: never leave in the middle of sex. :D

Adrea:  Sounds like the safest thing to do.  Especially when caught by an Angry, Magical, Orcish Librarian.  That's utterly horrifying even when you're wearing clothes!!  

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