This was so beautiful, so tender and so so so sad! ? Gwynolda must've been breaking to pieces inside if she decided to erase her own memory. 

So if I understood correctly this is the spell that Gauis removed from her in Riften's house? If that's the case, then oh boy, things are about to get even more complicated. The battlemage wants to hunt the Witch Queen and Gwyn just remembered that she was in love with her and the Queen cast her aside like a toy. ?

From the aesthetic point the screenshots were both sensual and somber (quite fitting since this was a sad memory). And also absolutely gorgeous.

These two were my favorite:

Now, while I am looking forward to the next episode, I am also kind of dreading to see Gwynolda's reaction. Poor girl, she needs a hug.

Stunning work, Resdayn. Thank you for sharing it with us. ?

I'm going to have to agree with Devianna here (I may have to make a stamp with those words ?), there was love and beauty in this entry, which made like a ray of light in the otherwise rather grim story of Gwynolda. Though it made sense love was the explanation of Evelyn's strange behavior towards the protagonist. The sex scene was also very sensual and enticing, despite having the softer touch that women's love does have. Plus graphically your ENB sublimated the skins, while the lighting, poses and expressions did the rest.

Now, though it's obvious you worked on the text part, the grammar is still a bit broken. That didn't prevent the writing to be quite poetic and enthralling, but if I were you, for one I'll try to make smaller sentences (don't do a sentence you can't read aloud without taking your breath) ; and for second everytime you have to choice to do so (movies, animes, even reading) try doing it in english. That will passively accustom you to their expressions and verbal rhythm, without too much extra effort in terms of time spending. But your style has potential, and already induces the mood quite well.

Anyway, more stakes for the future. Awaiting the next entry !

Malicia : « 

                 That Driada gal was very crazy : when you're doing your own pee-pee, you shouldn't touch the one of others, you see ? No wonder Gwynolda wants to forget everything, no.  »

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Hmm. Given all that I know, I can not help but pay attention to the fact that this is very strongly symbolism and projection. But I definitely like it. This is even a bit like a happy ending, it seems to me.
On the visual side, I really like the angles and angles of the scene itself, as well as the dof effect ^_^ 
Great job Res ^_^

thank you two beautiful bodies and a good ending ?

Nice one. I like this explantion for Gwynolda's memory loss. 

11 hours ago, Devianna said:

This was so beautiful, so tender and so so so sad! ? Gwynolda must've been breaking to pieces inside if she decided to erase her own memory. 

 

So if I understood correctly this is the spell that Gauis removed from her in Riften's house? If that's the case, then oh boy, things are about to get even more complicated. The battlemage wants to hunt the Witch Queen and Gwyn just remembered that she was in love with her and the Queen cast her aside like a toy. ?

 

From the aesthetic point the screenshots were both sensual and somber (quite fitting since this was a sad memory). And also absolutely gorgeous.

 

These two were my favorite:

 

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Now, while I am looking forward to the next episode, I am also kind of dreading to see Gwynolda's reaction. Poor girl, she needs a hug.

 

Stunning work, Resdayn. Thank you for sharing it with us. ?

 

Thank you so much ❤️

Yeah, this is just her memories comnig back after Gauis removed her spell, and yeah Evelynn broke the heart of the girl who know her identity and hang out with Gauis, she gonna have a bit of headache after it thats sure ?

I personally feel mixed about my screenshot, but you choosed pretty good ones, Im glad you like them :3.

Yeah, dealing with her mother, with Gauis and now even with a heart break, she need a break and relax to cope everything ?.

9 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I'm going to have to agree with Devianna here (I may have to make a stamp with those words ?), there was love and beauty in this entry, which made like a ray of light in the otherwise rather grim story of Gwynolda. Though it made sense love was the explanation of Evelyn's strange behavior towards the protagonist. The sex scene was also very sensual and enticing, despite having the softer touch that women's love does have. Plus graphically your ENB sublimated the skins, while the lighting, poses and expressions did the rest.

 

Now, though it's obvious you worked on the text part, the grammar is still a bit broken. That didn't prevent the writing to be quite poetic and enthralling, but if I were you, for one I'll try to make smaller sentences (don't do a sentence you can't read aloud without taking your breath) ; and for second everytime you have to choice to do so (movies, animes, even reading) try doing it in english. That will passively accustom you to their expressions and verbal rhythm, without too much extra effort in terms of time spending. But your style has potential, and already induces the mood quite well.

 

Anyway, more stakes for the future. Awaiting the next entry !

 

Malicia : « 

 

                 That Driada gal was very crazy : when you're doing your own pee-pee, you shouldn't touch the one of others, you see ? No wonder Gwynolda wants to forget everything, no.  »

Thank you ?

I kinda thought making a rather normal reason for our protag being at Evelynn's grace always, in the end it was just similar reasons like why Gwynolda liked her in the first place, made Evelynn more flawed human and just as human like our protag, in the end she need love and affection like any person, despite being a Scrissor women.

Love and heartbreak gonna make Gwynolda's return very complicated in the future :3.

Im happy to hear you like my screenshots, seems only me had some complains about them ?

I try improve my english with many ways, but still not perfect, but thank you for the compliment of my writing style ☺️

Well Malicia, when boys touch their pp and touch yours, that not seems weird to you? ?

8 hours ago, Jayomms said:

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7 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

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7 hours ago, Crw said:

Hmm. Given all that I know, I can not help but pay attention to the fact that this is very strongly symbolism and projection. But I definitely like it. This is even a bit like a happy ending, it seems to me.
On the visual side, I really like the angles and angles of the scene itself, as well as the dof effect ^_^ 
Great job Res ^_^

Thank you ?

Not sure what you meant by projection? Symbolism is pretty common thing in my writings, especially in Gwynolda's story :3.

Happy ending is a bit questionable, our protag got out alive and harmless, but we know this since the beginning at act 4, now she has her memories and currently in the present with Gauis, things can get really messy.

7 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you two beautiful bodies and a good ending ?

Thank you ?

Story is kinda far form the ending, just this story arc got closed, next one for her coming too.

5 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Nice one. I like this explantion for Gwynolda's memory loss. 

Thank you ?

I kinda thought herself erasing the pain seems fitting for her character.

4 hours ago, Resdayn said:

I kinda thought making a rather normal reason for our protag being at Evelynn's grace always, in the end it was just similar reasons like why Gwynolda liked her in the first place, made Evelynn more flawed human and just as human like our protag, in the end she need love and affection like any person, despite being a Scrissor women.

 

Love and heartbreak gonna make Gwynolda's return very complicated in the future :3.

4 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Well Malicia, when boys touch their pp and touch yours, that not seems weird to you? ?

Malicia : « If they're with me they're touching me. Otherwise, if they wanna feel good alone, there's no point in being with me, you see ?  »

Marvelous story. I don't know how I missed it.

Thank you for lesbian sex. It was awesome.

Great work Lady D.

7 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

Marvelous story. I don't know how I missed it.

Thank you for lesbian sex. It was awesome.

Great work Lady D.

Thank you ❤️

Very good story Residan. I finally had a chance to see G. in lesbian sex. That's my girl

3 minutes ago, Elf Prince said:

Very good story Residan. I finally had a chance to see G. in lesbian sex. That's my girl

Thank you ❤️

Oh wow, I didn't expect this at all! Gwynolda erased her own memory? That's intense; very melancholic, but powerful. Great work, Res!

54 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Oh wow, I didn't expect this at all! Gwynolda erased her own memory? That's intense; very melancholic, but powerful. Great work, Res!

Thank you ❤️

Well I thought its a good twist for it, and builds up the next parts well :3

Aw, sad.

7 hours ago, ther1pper said:

Aw, sad.

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