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One Shot: A Worthy Opponent


djregs

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Hello!

 

In light of some feedback I’ve received regarding text boxes, I’ve decided to adjust my style.  Rather than use the upcoming Varina story as a test, I decided to use this One Shot Entry. I tried to emulate a hentai manga feel for the Old Orc side quest in Skyrim.  Let me know how successful I was.  

 

Hope you Enjoy!

 

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Losing the Bet

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Aftermath

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Very good story. I haven't seen any poll options but I want(ed) her to win. maybe it's just me but I was little bit confused with options without options and the story went in direction I didn't expect. Anyway, love love your new dialogue boxes style. Much easier to read and follow. Compliments. :) 

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Wow okay that was really cool, a story with choices great work

 

Very readable, very well shot. I really liked it, cute character too ;) 

 

Now all you need to do is add a Banner image and get yourself a nice ENB

 

Even if you have a potato you can still run a ENB, try very light ones or ICNBIN ENB (I cant believe its not ab EBB) That will make your screenshots look 10x better

 

Tex

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39 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

Very good story. I haven't seen any poll options but I want(ed) her to win. maybe it's just me but I was little bit confused with options without options and the story went in direction I didn't expect. Anyway, love love your new dialogue boxes style. Much easier to read and follow. Compliments. :) 

Thank you!  There was only one outcome for the story.  Either you saw her keep her end of the bargain or it was implied she kept her end. But the real goal here was to get the dialogue boxes right.  Thank you!

 

36 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

Wow okay that was really cool, a story with choices great work

 

Very readable, very well shot. I really liked it, cute character too ;) 

 

Now all you need to do is add a Banner image and get yourself a nice ENB

 

Even if you have a potato you can still run a ENB, try very light ones or ICNBIN ENB (I cant believe its not ab EBB) That will make your screenshots look 10x better

 

Tex

 

Thanks!  Sadly, I do have a potato for a computer.  :bawling: I plan on changing that REAL soon.  I've heard of ICNBIN ENB.  Would you be able to recommend a light ENB that I might try to make those screenshots better?  Been looking for a good one!  

 

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19 minutes ago, djregs said:

Thank you!  There was only one outcome for the story.  Either you saw her keep her end of the bargain or it was implied she kept her end. But the real goal here was to get the dialogue boxes right.  Thank you!

 

> Oh, my apologies. I misinterpreted your saying. Yes, I like new way of story telling with new dialogue boxes. :)

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Great story! And new text boxes are pretty cool and clear ^_^ 
And yes,  it's easy and plesant to read and watch (you know what I mean)
who the hell will refuse to see orc on girl action? :D 

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thank you good story i thought the girl would beat him but the real life was cool to see how can they have sex all night ? beats me ?

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6 hours ago, Crw said:

Great story! And new text boxes are pretty cool and clear ^_^ 
And yes,  it's easy and plesant to read and watch (you know what I mean)
who the hell will refuse to see orc on girl action? :D 

Glad the text boxes are working as intended!  I don't know who would refuse to see that Orc on Girl action... maybe they're just in it for the story?  

 

1 hour ago, wilson99 said:

how can they have sex all night ? beats me ?

Orcish Stamina?

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13 hours ago, djregs said:

 

Thanks!  Sadly, I do have a potato for a computer.  :bawling: I plan on changing that REAL soon.  I've heard of ICNBIN ENB.  Would you be able to recommend a light ENB that I might try to make those screenshots better?  Been looking for a good one!  

 

I too have a potato 

 

 

I would say either check out ICBIN ENB or go onto nexus and type in low performance enb.

 

Or do what I do, (right now I have a low grade one so its not needed) but get an ENB you like, turn it off at the start of a game. Then line up screenshots, and then turn it on, screenshot, turn off and go

 

Its like a boot I guess. Its awesome

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Although Estelle is redhead she looks hot in that sexy outfit. I like her stockings. The new way of telling the story is great. Like new bubbles for it is much easier to read. Great work, djregs.

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3 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Although Estelle is redhead she looks hot in that sexy outfit. I like her stockings. The new way of telling the story is great. Like new bubbles for it is much easier to read. Great work, djregs.

Thanks for the Feedback, Prince!  Don't worry, you won't be seeing TOO much more of Estelle.  Gotta keep the number of redheads down for you!  :wacko:

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23 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Oh yeah this format is much better, way easier to read!

Well done!

 

Thank you!  Implementing the changes immediately!  :D

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I agree, the squares were an improvement, but for still images, no format beats bubbles in readability ! Though the fight images lacked a bit in clarity (some movement effect would help IMO, maybe check Wanobi's tutorials ?), the onomatopoeia made up for it, and so between the bubbles and the onomatopoeia, that new format was quite efficient. Overall you've got your ways to always lighten the events, and so combining the eye-candy characters with the vivid poses, it's as usual a quite pleasant read. :D

 

Malicia : « Estelle is very nice and very pretty, but she picked the wrong outfit to fight people, you see ? Tryade's armor and boots looks more like this ones -> 4012a93045f02eee8a0b017834e7fbd6.jpg :classic_lightbulb: »

On 6/28/2019 at 1:30 PM, Elf Prince said:

Although Estelle is redhead she looks hot in that sexy outfit.

Malicia : :classic_dodgy:

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5 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I agree, the squares were an improvement, but for still images, no format beats bubbles in readability ! Though the fight images lacked a bit in clarity (some movement effect would help IMO, maybe check Wanobi's tutorials ?), the onomatopoeia made up for it, and so between the bubbles and the onomatopoeia, that new format was quite efficient. Overall you've got your ways to always lighten the events, and so combining the eye-candy characters with the vivid poses, it's as usual a quite pleasant read. :D

 

Malicia : « Estelle is very nice and very pretty, but she picked the wrong outfit to fight people, you see ? Tryade's armor and boots looks more like this ones -> 4012a93045f02eee8a0b017834e7fbd6.jpg :classic_lightbulb: »

Thanks for the feedback!  Hmm, motion tutorials...interesting.  I'll try to apply it in other stories.  The next story is just about done, so expect it this week! 

 

Also!  When was the last time you saw a ninja fighting in full plate armor?  

 

5 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : :classic_dodgy:

Adrea:  I've given up trying to please that one... :unamused:

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3 hours ago, djregs said:

Thanks for the feedback!  Hmm, motion tutorials...interesting.  I'll try to apply it in other stories.  The next story is just about done, so expect it this week!

Oh oh, great news ! :smiley:

3 hours ago, djregs said:

Also!  When was the last time you saw a ninja fighting in full plate armor? 

Malicia : « The last time I saw the meany guy with spiral eyes in Naruto, yep. They called him Banana Uchiha I think. And he was very scary.  :classic_lightbulb: »

3 hours ago, djregs said:

Adrea:  I've given up trying to please that one... :unamused:

Malicia : « Guys are very silly. That's cause they think with their pee-pee. :classic_sleep: »

 

 

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Great standalone, I really like the "choose your own adventure" tribute and the hentai style inner monologue. 

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8 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Great standalone, I really like the "choose your own adventure" tribute and the hentai style inner monologue. 

 

Looks like everyone wants a choose your own adventure story.  I'd be down for that but... so many pictures :bawling:

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If the big plan for the gals getting rounded up involved some more scenarios like this I think we might all be okay with it ?

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