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1 minute ago, Deso561PL said:

I smell an good yuri lewd! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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Hum, so in fact those are memories of Gwynolda's stay at the Forsworn, and the inn she's referring to is the one Driada was in (and not Gauis)  ? If I'm right, one of two lines of disambiguation at the start could help making sure those flashbacks are understood correctly. And what flashback ! A post of sensuality and atmosphere, immersed in the lore, in the best Resdayn tradition ! Aesthetically, I find Gwynolda's warpaints particularly interesting, looking a bit like some reptile's skin yet organized in a tribal way. Awaiting for the next chapter !

Malicia : « She looks like those people who paint themselves to look clothed when they're not, yes. 

               Anyway, I warned her about booze but she didn't listen.  »

40 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Hum, so in fact those are memories of Gwynolda's stay at the Forsworn, and the inn she's referring to is the one Driada was in (and not Gauis)  ? If I'm right, one of two lines of disambiguation at the start could help making sure those flashbacks are understood correctly.

Yes these are her forsworn memories, so flashbacks of her times, it is effectively continue the same part where Blade of the Old Gods entry finished.

She refer Driada herself of course, Gauis is usually referred by his titles.

Also Gauis was never was Innkeeper

40 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 And what flashback ! A post of sensuality and atmosphere, immersed in the lore, in the best Resdayn tradition ! Aesthetically, I find Gwynolda's warpaints particularly interesting, looking a bit like some reptile's skin yet organized in a tribal way. Awaiting for the next chapter !

 

Thanks  

Well I found the previous one rather meh, but served its purpose type of entry, this one is much more liked by me.

And yes it brings all of my strength and usual perks.

Well Driada painted on her, so she may cover later the lessons of the culture. ?

40 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « She looks like those people who paint themselves to look clothed when they're not, yes. 

 

               Anyway, I warned her about booze but she didn't listen.  »

Gwynolda not drink alcohol.

And Driada painted her ?

19 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Yes these are her forsworn memories, so falshbacks of her times, it is effectively continue the same part where Blade of the Old Gods entry finished.

I got it right because I knew this was supposed to be a flashback ; but I think people following the story less closely might get confused about it. If I were you I'd try to outline the fact it's a memory, otherwise some people might think Gauis teleported her. ?

19 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Gwynolda not drink alcohol.

 

And Driada painted her ?

Malicia : « I see you need expert advice too...

               Well when you go to the inn and wake up somewhere else, naked, and you don't remember how you got there ; it's that you drank too much booze, you see ?  »

6 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

I got it right because I knew this was supposed to be a flashback ; but I think people following the story less closely might get confused about it. If I were you I'd try to outline the fact it's a memory, otherwise some people might think Gauis teleported her. ?

 

Gauis said about removing the enchantment blocking her memories, I think it was very obvious. ?

I put up later or write an author notes then.

6 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

Malicia : « I see you need expert advice too...

               Well when you go to the inn and wake up somewhere else, naked, and you don't remember how you got there ; it's that you drank too much booze, you see ?  »

She got kidnapped ya not remember ?

2 minutes ago, Jayomms said:

43 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Gauis said about removing the enchantment blocking her memories, I think it was very obvious. ?

 

I put up later or write an author notes then.

It is to me, but I have access to exclusive fan previews.

43 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

She got kidnapped ya not remember ?

Malicia : « I remember very well, yes ! She got kidnapped 'cause falling asleep, after going honey-honey with a perfect stranger, into an inn with bottles inside !  »

8 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

It is to me, but I have access to exclusive fan previews.

 

Hmmmm? ?

8 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « I remember very well, yes ! She got kidnapped 'cause falling asleep after going honey-honey with a perfect stranger into an inn with bottles inside !  »

Yep ?

Nice tattos and stuff ^_^ 
Uhhh... no beast lewds and rivers of nord's blood =((  
Nicly done ^_^ 

2 minutes ago, Crw said:

Nice tattos and stuff ^_^ 
Uhhh... no beast lewds and rivers of nord's blood =((  
Nicly done ^_^ 

Thank you  .

I think thats Gwynolda's view on their primal culture, but Drida can show her the actual one.

Very interesting flashback and her markings look great.  The Witch Queen seems both threatening and somehow motherly, which is a very curious combination. 

P.S. Gwynolda looks extra cute on this screenshot.
 

12 minutes ago, Devianna said:

Very interesting flashback and her markings look great.  The Witch Queen seems both threatening and somehow motherly, which is a very curious combination. 

 

Thank you ? , yeah I like those markings as well.

Threatening part is understatement after her doings in the story ?, and the motherly part haha, curious observation, rather deadly combination for the Gwynolda who has mother problems. ?

13 minutes ago, Devianna said:

 

P.S. Gwynolda looks extra cute on this screenshot.
 

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Great job! This flashback is great with all the sequences of characters we've been seeing lately. Makes me wonder how this moment in the past will affect the approaching future of Gwynolda's decisions. 

Also, I know the defaced one was just a disguise, but I quite like her appearance! See more of her maybe?  

4 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Great job! This flashback is great with all the sequences of characters we've been seeing lately. Makes me wonder how this moment in the past will affect the approaching future of Gwynolda's decisions. 

 

Also, I know the defaced one was just a disguise, but I quite like her appearance! See more of her maybe?  

Thank you ?

This flashback is quite  important in the coming Act 5, after all it can affect many things and can make decisions lot harder Iudex Gwynolda especially when about Driada. ?

We see about it, design is pretty cool ?

Ooohh I love Gwyn's warpaints!! Those are badass!! And sexy!

And of course, her walking around nekid the whole time was a treat!

Beautiful work!

P.S. The forsworn need to invest in a better cage. I think Mama June could'a fit through those bars, let alone Gwyn! ?

3 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

Ooohh I love Gwyn's warpaints!! Those are badass!! And sexy!

And of course, her walking around nekid the whole time was a treat!

Beautiful work!

 

P.S. The forsworn need to invest in a better cage. I think Mama June could'a fit through those bars, let alone Gwyn! ?

Thank you ?.

I think cages are more lot of nords than one breton girls in those camps.

Also nord skulls are only steel there ?

Nice. I liked the Reach setting for your story so I'm glad you are back there for a bit. SO much interesting lore and background there that the vanilla game doesn't really make much use of. 

7 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Nice. I liked the Reach setting for your story so I'm glad you are back there for a bit. SO much interesting lore and background there that the vanilla game doesn't really make much use of. 

Well I never really left this part of the story, just needed some break due plot reasons ?

Wow, nice work

Just now, Agent Tex said:

Wow, nice work

Thank you