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Chapter 18. If you want something done right...

As usual, I ask you to read and vote ^_^ Thank you =)  

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  1. 1. Did Rose took the book?

    • Of course, book lies there alone, probably something interesting.
    • No, it's most likely dangerous, not to mention the fact that belongs someone else.
  2. 2. Should Isabella go and check Rose?

    • Well, she tinkers there for a long time, yes.
    • Nah, she is a big girl, she can handle it.
  3. 3. Are they good girls or bad? :)

    • Good ^_^
    • Baaaaad. Very, very bad >_<

Greetings, dear traveler?
 

Time to continue the story of Rosa and her long-suffering company, I am extremely pleased with the pictures and dialogues of this part, and I am interested to hear your opinion on this matter ^_^
Initially, this chapter should have been shorter. Way shorter. On something like 20p shorter. :D I dunno how thats happend.

 

Have a wonderful week :) 

 

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1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « They're all kissing each other on the mouth, even though they're girls. They're very confused. :classic_dry: »

Malicia : « 'cause friends discuss and eat cookies together. They don't kiss each other on the mouth, no. :classic_sleep: »

Hahahahahahahhhahahhahhahahhahahahahahahahhahhhaa - it's the matter of the custom. In our house Malicija would have coffee, cookies and French kissing with Ivy and Eva and M/FFF sex afterwards. :)

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On 11/9/2018 at 5:13 PM, Tirloque said:

Nice episode indeed, quite some mystery, lots of sexy content, and great looking screens (the last one, some with Rosa's hair underneath her veil, and some of Gwen x Sinetica are specially noticeable). About the english, I see you tried to make the style more fluid and direct, and it worked, but your grammar is still to be perfected (you tend to forget pronouns, for example "so I'm bait" should be "So I'm a bait" or "So I'm the bait ?").

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this one ^_^ I will try to continue working on my grammar ^_^
 

On 11/9/2018 at 5:13 PM, Tirloque said:

To acquire this, you could try getting used to watch movies or animes that might passively give you the hang of it.

I like your advice. Thank you sensei 🙏:D 

 

On 11/9/2018 at 5:13 PM, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « They're all kissing each other on the mouth, even though they're girls. They're very confused. :classic_dry: »

Rose: « Because she is very sad and lonely, and there is no prince to kiss her, you see? So with that, I'm just helping her  😊 »

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11 minutes ago, Crw said:

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed this one ^_^ I will try to continue working on my grammar ^_^
 

I like your advice. Thank you sensei 🙏:D

As it took you a bit longer than usual to respond I was starting to think you might've been offended by my criticism (as I often try to underline both strength and weaknesses most of the time). I'm glad to read that's not the case, Crw. We're in the same storytelling boat. :classic_wink:

11 minutes ago, Crw said:

Rose: « Because she is very sad and lonely, and there is no prince to kiss her, you see? So with that, I'm just helping her  😊 »

Malicia : « I see... Maybe. Though you could chat with her or bake her cookies too. million_dollar_baby.gif Just make sure not to kiss her pee-pee, or you'll turn like this -> 200px-SR-creature-Draugr_Female.jpg »

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22 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

As it took you a bit longer than usual to respond I was starting to think you might've been offended by my criticism (as I often try to underline both strength and weaknesses most of the time). I'm glad to read that's not the case, Crw. We're in the same storytelling boat. :classic_wink:

Malicia : « I see... Maybe. Though you could chat with her or bake her cookies too. million_dollar_baby.gif Just make sure not to kiss her pee-pee, or you'll turn like this -> 200px-SR-creature-Draugr_Female.jpg »

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Just make sure ...to kiss her pee-pee, (f)or you'll turn like this :  Like my Prince :P

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1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

As it took you a bit longer than usual to respond I was starting to think you might've been offended by my criticism (as I often try to underline both strength and weaknesses most of the time). I'm glad to read that's not the case, Crw. We're in the same storytelling boat. :classic_wink:

I apologize for creating this feeling, just been a bit busy with rl stuff :)  
Criticism is useful, it helps to grow. Besides, it is almost impossible to offend me 😋 (have no soul to hurt, lol)

 

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « I see... Maybe. Though you could chat with her or bake her cookies too. million_dollar_baby.gif Just make sure not to kiss her pee-pee, or you'll turn like this -> 200px-SR-creature-Draugr_Female.jpg »

Rose: « Ooops. A bit late for warnings... :classic_blush: What do I need to kiss to be cured of it?  »
 

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1 hour ago, Crw said:

I apologize for creating this feeling, just been a bit busy with rl stuff :)  
Criticism is useful, it helps to grow. Besides, it is almost impossible to offend me 😋 (have no soul to hurt, lol)

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1 hour ago, Crw said:

Rose: « Ooops. A bit late for warnings... :classic_blush: What do I need to kiss to be cured of it?  »

Malicia : « Erh... Kirino39.gif~original

 

 

                 Dunno. :classic_excl: »

 

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4 hours ago, Crw said:

I apologize for creating this feeling, just been a bit busy with rl stuff :)  
Criticism is useful, it helps to grow. Besides, it is almost impossible to offend me 😋 (have no soul to hurt, lol)

 

Rose: « Ooops. A bit late for warnings... :classic_blush: What do I need to kiss to be cured of it?  »
 

You need to kiss her

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