Wow! This was hot. Gwynolda and Hamal fantasising about each other was very well done and gave us insight into their sub/dom desires, it helps that the screens were so good! And also the fact that Hamal is stunning. <.<

Also it was very interesting to see Hamal's leadership being questioned, I wonder how she'll deal with it and what she'll do next. And what part Gwynolda might play in it. But, the assassin she sent in the end certainly gives us an idea of what she's capable of...

Keep up the good work! ^^

I missed this story so much!! Thank you for updating!

Love me some MILF action, and also I'm really curious about this assassin character 👀

Great chapter!

Great chapter! Good mix of debating and dreaming about each other. Really cool way to show the relationship between them. 
 

The scenes are really hot! If you’re feeling like doing another spin off, how about showing Saoirse kicking druadach out of Markarth :P

12 hours ago, Abandoner said:

Wow! This was hot. Gwynolda and Hamal fantasising about each other was very well done and gave us insight into their sub/dom desires, it helps that the screens were so good! And also the fact that Hamal is stunning. <.<

 

Also it was very interesting to see Hamal's leadership being questioned, I wonder how she'll deal with it and what she'll do next. And what part Gwynolda might play in it. But, the assassin she sent in the end certainly gives us an idea of what she's capable of...

 

Keep up the good work! ^^

 

 

Thank you 😊

Well in Gwynolda's case it was a nightmare, idea was to contrast it their view on each other's relationship 

I'm glad you like her new redesign, I was a bit worried on her, but 🤭nice to make a more mature lady for once.

You know what they say, sometimes leaders need to be questioned 😇, I think this way she can be a more compelling or bit more human antagonist, we see how she solve it.

But I think having assassins may tell, she not play fair always , she certainly has a hand what reaches quite deep in.

12 hours ago, TactusAuValiiRath said:

I missed this story so much!! Thank you for updating!

Love me some MILF action, and also I'm really curious about this assassin character 👀

Great chapter!

Thank you 😊

It was indeed some milf action 👀

We see about her soon more 

Glad you enjoyed it 

11 hours ago, VFB said:

Great chapter! Good mix of debating and dreaming about each other. Really cool way to show the relationship between them. 
 

The scenes are really hot! If you’re feeling like doing another spin off, how about showing Saoirse kicking druadach out of Markarth

Thank you 

😏I'm glad those scenes worked out and showcased the intended result.

I'm not sure on spin-offs but if you really wonder about Saoirse, we slowly learn more and more about her as story goes, maybe we see her kicking ass 

15 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

😁

Quite an interesting chapter, with Hamal's wet dreams contrasting with Gwynolda wet nightmares. We also get some good insight about the whereabouts of Dibella's temple council. And there, just like she didn't perceive Gwynolda's hate (she must've thought she was kind of a sub ?), it seems she was surprised as well to see her authority questioned and limited by the other elders. This introduces at least three opposite factions in the temple, creating risk and uncertainty which are excellent. All of that with some breathtaking screens (the body, face, and body hair textures in particular were extra crispy, and the facial expressions really on point). It's also good that you implemented one action scene at the end, though it sees you're not yet comfortable doing them, as the repeated ellipsis on the take-downs hint. Nonetheless, it balanced quite well the static and dreamy first scenes of the chapter. And no major grammatical mistake as well. Good chapter.

« I very understand Gwynolda. I mean, if I were trapped in a temple, with older gals making you kiss their feet and putting rods in your bum,

                 just 'cause they're too disturbed to admit they're craving a guy, I'd be having a bad time too. 

                  And then showing her pee-pee to everyone while nobody asked ?

                 They need to get laid, yes. »

30 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Quite an interesting chapter, with Hamal's wet dreams contrasting with Gwynolda wet nightmares. We also get some good insight about the whereabouts of Dibella's temple council. And there, just like she didn't perceive Gwynolda's hate (she must've thought she was kind of a sub ?), it seems she was surprised as well to see her authority questioned and limited by the other elders. This introduces at least three opposite factions in the temple, creating risk and uncertainty which are excellent.

Thank you 😊, I'm glad you enjoyed it

Well it was about time to move things a bit and introduce our main antagonist 😝, outside of Gwynolda's thoughts.

I think it most likely, she didn't really considered our protagonist feelings about her punishment too important to note , rather then she wasn't aware.

If in her perspective things goes well, it's a surprise hey 😝, but I believe that

I'm happy that the temple "politics" was doin it's intended role 🤓

33 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

  All of that with some breathtaking screens (the body, face, and body hair textures in particular were extra crispy, and the facial expressions really on point).

 

I do plan looking into in more ways to improve the visuals, there is always new things to do and it seems my fallout 4 adventure learnt me a few trick 😝

I'm glad you enjoyed the pictures. 😊

34 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 It's also good that you implemented one action scene at the end, though it sees you're not yet comfortable doing them, as the repeated ellipsis on the take-downs hint. Nonetheless, it balanced quite well the static and dreamy first scenes of the chapter. And no major grammatical mistake as well. Good chapter.

Ohhh I originally didn't planned that one, I just expanded a bit latter part to balance things out, sadly combat scenes or similars are quite a pain in skyrim, I could make them easier in fallout 4 😇

I'm comfortable to make combat scenes, but vanilla fight animations are more funny than serious 😝, and making combat can be more messy than it worth, I usually avoided.

It's not really the part of the makings, I really enjoy.

I wanted put some in to make our villain look more serious, and raise stakes a bit.

44 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

« I very understand Gwynolda. I mean, if I were trapped in a temple, with older gals making you kiss their feet and putting rods in your bum,

                 just 'cause they're too disturbed to admit they're craving a guy, I'd be having a bad time too. 

 

                  And then showing her pee-pee to everyone while nobody asked ?

                 

                 They need to get laid, yes. »

They do get laid dear Malicia, and Gwynolda got punished for her past actions, which she told us in previous chapters 😇

You should visit it sometimes, maybe they teach you a few thing

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

I think it most likely, she didn't really considered our protagonist feelings about her punishment too important to note , rather then she wasn't aware.

 

If in her perspective things goes well, it's a surprise hey 😝, but I believe that  cornered Villains are more dangerous don't you agree mr Tirloque 😏

The more cornered they are, the more extreme they are likely to get. I'm sure our Forsworn friends would share such concept.

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

I'm happy that the temple "politics" was doin it's intended role 🤓

 

I do plan looking into in more ways to improve the visuals, there is always new things to do and it seems my fallout 4 adventure learnt me a few trick 😝

 

I'm glad you enjoyed the pictures. 😊

 

Ohhh I originally didn't planned that one, I just expanded a bit latter part to balance things out, sadly combat scenes or similars are quite a pain in skyrim, I could make them easier in fallout 4 😇

 

I'm comfortable to make combat scenes, but vanilla fight animations are more funny than serious 😝, and making combat can be more messy than it worth, I usually avoided.

 

It's not really the part of the makings, I really enjoy.

Well the more your practice the better you get. Your screenarchery and storytelling did improve with time, while mine have been stalled since a while now.

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

They do get laid dear Malicia, and Gwynolda got punished for her past actions, which she told us in previous chapters 😇

 

You should visit it sometimes, maybe they teach you a few thing

« No thanks. I'll likely catch a cold in there.

               But you can ask Tryade instead. I think she should blend in very well. Specially when they'll try the rod in the poo-poo. »

10 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

The more cornered they are, the more extreme they are likely to get. I'm sure our Forsworn friends would share such concept.

😝

10 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

Well the more your practice the better you get. Your screenarchery and storytelling did improve with time, while mine have been stalled since a while now.

I wanna improve it more.

10 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

« No thanks. I'll likely catch a cold in there.

               But you can ask Tryade instead. I think she should blend in very well. Specially when they'll try the rod in the poo-poo. »

 

Thank you for this fantastic journey you made for us , can't wait whats next , made my day again  😄

40 minutes ago, wilson99 said:

Thank you for this fantastic journey you made for us , can't wait whats next , made my day again  😄

Thank you 😊

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter Wilson!

Finally, I got the chance to read up.

😲That's an amazing new chapter.

I looooove the temple politics and characters, they are really individuals. From the story and from their physical shape.

🥂Excellent 

7 hours ago, worik said:

Finally, I got the chance to read up.

 

😲That's an amazing new chapter.

I looooove the temple politics and characters, they are really individuals. From the story and from their physical shape.

 

🥂Excellent 

Thank you 😊

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you enjoy the temple politics 👀

We get more from them in the coming chapters.