I like it so far, cant wait to see how it goes, you don't need to make it too dark if you don't want to but that's your call as a writer. 

I am a little unsure about the choice for the black and white shots, not that I mind but I am curious on why you decided to do that?

7 minutes ago, Neonredkill said:

I like it so far, cant wait to see how it goes, you don't need to make it too dark if you don't want to but that's your call as a writer. 

Good to know . And I'll try to avoid going too dark... but you know, it's elder scrolls, shit happens. As this is all in past tense though, you know its gonna end up in a better place.

4 minutes ago, Neonredkill said:

I am a little unsure about the choice for the black and white shots, not that I mind but I am curious on why you decided to do that?

Eh... artistic licenses. I'm always experimenting. Not really a fan of BW shots either, but thought a couple of them wouldn't hurt. Also if you want extra reasons, just thought it would separate that event from the others as they're all "sex" but there are some differences and I dont want to make it monotonous.

There's probably yet another reason but I got the wrong person though ? There is this mini quest where Brelyna makes you supposedly green and see all green, so color perception may be a side-effect of Enisse spending time with the other students trying to trick them into having sex with her.

I don't mind if it gets too dark, I was just noticing that you felt concerned with having to take the story in a potentially edgy place. 

"I'm not much of a fan of "edgy". I'll do what's necessary, but I still prefer to be a bit less dark. We'll see how this turns..."

1 hour ago, Neonredkill said:

I don't mind if it gets too dark, I was just noticing that you felt concerned with having to take the story in a potentially edgy place.

Dont mind me saying that. If I'm "worried" about it, that's my own deal

It's just that I have acertain line of content I enjoy making usually, and "edgy" is the radical opposite of it. But I'll manage. It's entirely possible, I believe, to make tales going to dak places without falling into certain narrative trends. It is not possible however to talk about a sex demon without pushing some boundaries, and this was something I had clear about this character, even long before deciding to make these specifically.

As I said, my own deal. Seen stuff here at LL that goes even beyond the definition of "edgy" so I'm pretty sure no one will bat an eye and the thing will end up looking pretty tame in general ?

Fair, there was this one succubus playthrough i saw using something called slaverun? either way their origin story was kind of dark as they were captured by dremora and their soul was raped out of them thus turning into a succubus. So yeh... kinda dark

So two screenshots I really love of yours!
-The first is the rolling ball down the stairs. Dont know why, but the composition and lighting gives that pic such an awesome look.

-The other is the last pic where the edges and textures seems overly sharper compared to the rest of the screenshots. Was it taken at a higher resolution?

6 hours ago, Myst42 said:

......Eh... artistic licenses. I'm always experimenting. Not really a fan of BW shots either, but thought a couple of them wouldn't hurt. Also if you want extra reasons, just thought it would separate that event from the others as they're all "sex" but there are some differences and I dont want to make it monotonous.

That was my first thought when you went black and white on us, and then again with a filter. I figured it was separating two events and visual shorthand to show the passage of time.

1 hour ago, Myst42 said:

...I believe, to make tales going to dak places without falling into certain narrative trends. It is not possible however to talk about a sex demon without pushing some boundaries, and this was something I had clear about this character, even long before deciding to make these specifically.

As I said, my own deal. Seen stuff here at LL that goes even beyond the definition of "edgy" so I'm pretty sure no one will bat an eye and the thing will end up looking pretty tame in general ?

I think good writing in general pulls in more people. You do not need to worry about needing to go "edgy" or "grimdark" even if your story involves a sex demon. In fact, you should check out @Devianna and @SpyVsPie as they have some of the best writing out there and "dark" is not something i personally would describe their writing/story. Granted, this is coming from a person whose stories has its own category of "Horror" in @Tirloque story library

So you write what you want....

9 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

-The first is the rolling ball down the stairs. Dont know why, but the composition and lighting gives that pic such an awesome look.

Thanks and yeah, that was made specifically for aesthetic purposes. It's just the Eye of Magnus from the unfinished college main quest though.

9 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

-The other is the last pic where the edges and textures seems overly sharper compared to the rest of the screenshots. Was it taken at a higher resolution?

No the only thing that changed was the FOV. I prefer character shots at smaller FOVs and scenic shots appreciater at wider ones.

9 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

I think good writing in general pulls in more people. You do not need to worry about needing to go "edgy" or "grimdark" even if your story involves a sex demon. In fact, you should check out @Devianna and @SpyVsPie as they have some of the best writing out there and "dark" is not something i personally would describe their writing/story. Granted, this is coming from a person whose stories has its own category of "Horror" in @Tirloque story library

Seen some of your stuff btw. I stand in awe of your dedication to make the whole deal "comic-book-like"

I'm a lot lazier, which is one of the reasons I chose this format for stories... Just a few screenshots focused on aesthetics and artistry I guess, little text and little edits. Anything more like what some people manage to do would be a lot harder and more time consuming for me, considering setting ever screenshot is already a lot of work.

Great stuff and fantastic screenshots!

Keep it up!

9 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great stuff and fantastic screenshots!

Keep it up!

Thanks Alter!

Hoho, but this is looking more and more like a full fledged story ! Inspired from one of your character's gameplay probably, but with more intent in the way the screens are set and posed, with convincing expressions as well. I must admire the colors, view angles and composition for a lot of them, emphasizing the effect of most scenes. The writing style is also quite fluid and efficient, though I think a larger font size and spacing could give a bit more presence to it. And the dark tone is promising for the future scenario events. Great entry !

« That Enisse gal sure looks like she's very expert at going honey-honey.

              I think she should very write a book about it. For tips and tricks, yes.  »

On 6/9/2021 at 6:17 AM, devious-Drunna said:

I think good writing in general pulls in more people. You do not need to worry about needing to go "edgy" or "grimdark" even if your story involves a sex demon. In fact, you should check out @Devianna and @SpyVsPie as they have some of the best writing out there and "dark" is not something i personally would describe their writing/story. Granted, this is coming from a person whose stories has its own category of "Horror" in @Tirloque story library

So you write what you want....

Who dares wake me from my slumber ?

Anyway, personally I think of the different attraction point of a story as entertainment types. The more the author has, the more varied, it gets, the better. Now being steady in terms of contents types also is a pro, but having the scenario in itself being entertaining is definitely an asset. So, like Drunna said, don't hesitate to go dark !