O noooooooooooooooooo. Is it invasion of redheads?

Nice work Residan.

5 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

 O noooooooooooooooooo. Is it invasion of redheads?

Nice work Residan.

I like redhead women oke? xd

Thank you

Remarkable work from a graphical point of view, the colors, crispiness, poses, angles of view and even DoF are applied by experienced hands and it shows. Now, scenario-wise, I appreciate the ever underneath humor (the irony of everything Vera thinks and does, the soporific effect of her story over Eliza, etc.), and the little twist you inserted concluding the adventure. However, they're often designed in a "writer's bubble" way, which means you do exploit what you don't show to your readers at some moment, to then reveal the twist afterwards. Yet, outside of that bubble, it is likely the protagonist or readers would've had other inputs informing them earlier (the necromancer would've at least made a sound while being killed). Some difficulties regarding the tenses of the verbs as well, though that doesnt hinder the read. Which is funny and pleasant overall. 

15 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

 O noooooooooooooooooo. Is it invasion of redheads?

« We've always been there, you just didn't notice.

               Just like the freckle on the left part of your nose, yes. »

18 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Remarkable work from a graphical point of view, the colors, crispiness, poses, angles of view and even DoF are applied by experienced hands and it shows. Now, scenario-wise, I appreciate the ever underneath humor (the irony of everything Vera thinks and does, the soporific effect of her story over Eliza, etc.), and the little twist you inserted concluding the adventure. However, they're often designed in a "writer's bubble" way, which means you do exploit what you don't show to your readers at some moment, to then reveal the twist afterwards. Yet, outside of that bubble, it is likely the protagonist or readers would've had other inputs informing them earlier (the necromancer would've at least made a sound while being killed). Some difficulties regarding the tenses of the verbs as well, though that doesnt hinder the read. Which is funny and pleasant overall. 

 

« We've always been there, you just didn't notice.

 

               Just like the freckle on the left part of your nose, yes. »

 

Well this is more my first try to use a different kind of protag and different type of story, so its really to try lady Vera and her sillyness.

Yeah, this chapter ended up shorter then planned, if I can be honest half less, Im not really happy, hopefully next one works better.

Its a side project really and to try new things, outside the grimdark horror what I normally do, so we can expect some "writers bubble" or other mistakes, as I try focus explore something new for me.

Im glad chapter is still enjoyable.

Thinking on how much I need work on Gwynolda's next chapter and scenes, yeah it gonna take a while, sometimes nice to have something easier to work on.

So many questions!

Do I really want to know, how he died or would it spoil my positive impression of Eliza ?

What secret (paralizing) power is hidden inside of Vera when she can knock out Eliza?

And why is she wearing her amulet again? Wasn't she told to leave it in the last episode? 

? Ok, we already DO know, that she isn't doing what she was told to do. But I am sure Eliza will take care of that and raise Vera's obedience stats.

5 hours ago, worik said:

So many questions!

 

Do I really want to know, how he died or would it spoil my positive impression of Eliza ?

What secret (paralizing) power is hidden inside of Vera when she can knock out Eliza?

And why is she wearing her amulet again? Wasn't she told to leave it in the last episode? 

 

? Ok, we already DO know, that she isn't doing what she was told to do. But I am sure Eliza will take care of that and raise Vera's obedience stats.

After Gwynolda its kinda hard to have any positive on Eliza, we all know what kind of person she is ?

She just told her too boring romance stories and here Eliza aint a big powerful vampire, she is an old lady, just keep herself look young ?

Well as we saw in the picnic plan, Vera dont really listen to an hrumpy lady, she promised an adventure so she went do it ?

Amulet has its reasons.

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

Amulet has its reasons.

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

She just told her too boring romance stories and here Eliza aint a big powerful vampire, she is an old lady, just keep herself look young ?

Eliza is a very attractive character. Well done

Rather short entry this time around but still funny and entertaining. Ver's opinion of herself as the protagonist is well done and the boring Eliza to sleep part was great!

1 hour ago, SpyVsPie said:

Rather short entry this time around but still funny and entertaining. Ver's opinion of herself as the protagonist is well done and the boring Eliza to sleep part was great!

Sadly went shorter then planned.

Im glad its worked decently as chapter.

8 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Sadly went shorter then planned.

 

Im glad its worked decently as chapter.

Sometimes a quick story is good for getting back into the swing of things after a break.

Lady Ver is just too cute!

I really enjoy the way you write her.  It feels like Lady Ver turns everything that happens in her life into an adventure that she is both participating in and observing from the side.  Almost like she is a writer of her own story. 

I'm really glad she disarmed that bear trap (or just accidentally tripped it closed) in the beginning.  When I first saw it on the screenshot I was worried that she might end up injuring herself. ?

Her inner dialogues are extremely entertaining, as well as her reaction to everything.  " Ewww, a corpse"  and " I should find bolts for it, since I don't think it works without them" lines were great ?

As much as I love your Gwynolda I am still secretly hoping for a grand adventure with Lady Ver and Eliza.  There is SO much potential there for whacky and humorous (as well as lewd) situations ?

And as everyone already mentioned, the screenshots are absolutely beautiful and a real pleasure to look at.

I do have one little complaint - 51 isn't old!   Eliza is gorgeous and experienced, that's all. ?

Wonderful entry, Res!  Hoping to see more of their story soon! ?