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Dark Ascension Horizon: Chapter 12, Part 3


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Unable to find and capture the criminal Mort, the Kun Guardsmen contracted Selenia in hopes that her powers will help in finding and arresting Mort for his crimes. Once inside the city however, Selenia is unaware the dangers lurking around her as capturing Mort may be the least of her problems.

 

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Dark Ascension: Horizon, Book 2

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Part 1

Chapter 7: Parts 2 and 3

Chapter 8

Chapter 9 "SPECIAL"

Chapter 10
Chapter 11: Parts 1 and 2
Chapter 11: Part 3
Chapter 11: Parts 4 and 5

Chapter 12: Part 1

Chapter 12: Part 2

Chapter 12: Part 3

Chapter 13: Part 1 (coming soon)

 

Dark Ascension, Book 1

Chapter 1: Fortune's Bedfellows

Chapter 2: Reaper's Covenant

Chapter 3: Journey's Shadowed Path

Chapter 4: Essence Awakenings

Chapter 5:Secrets Under the Stairs

Chapter 6: Vestal's Order

Chapter 7: Veracity’s Twilight

Chapter 8: Pawns in Portension’s Shadow

Chapter 9: Hath Thee in Thrall

Chapter 10: No Tomorrow

Chapter 11: In the Mouth of Chaos and Lust

Chapter 12: The Laconic Pathway

Chapter 13: Divine Pestilence

Chapter 14: Lascivious Connections 

Chapter 15: Cross the Rubikon

 

Dark Ascension, Initiates' Tales

-From the Drunna’s Den Blog-

Part 1

Part 2

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Wow, that's just great! I really love ol that ol' fashion tricks with lights and shadow! Like the shadow on a wall behind a character and stuff! 
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Considering how Skyrim process shadows and light sources I bet that was an interesting task to solve!
And yes, Jenna's boobs got bigger?

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13 hours ago, Crw said:

Wow, that's just great! I really love ol that ol' fashion tricks with lights and shadow! Like the shadow on a wall behind a character and stuff! 
123.jpg.331d7e1bbc14bfc828a61a277c23557e.jpg <= Like here! 
Considering how Skyrim process shadows and light sources I bet that was an interesting task to solve!
And yes, Jenna's boobs got bigger?


hey thanks!

 

I have ENB on in CreationKit so it makes it easy testing out placing light shadows in a space. I also had to scale the person shadowed larger and clip them downward to get the right angle. The whole thing took less than a minute once I had the light source setup in CK. :)

 

i think Jens boobs were maxed out so maybe the angle makes her boobs look bigger? 🤔

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pls pls pls pls dont kill Selenia shes so hot i absolutely love her

 

this is i think the first time i comment on your story and i would like to say that your overall characters bodies, lighting, and everything else remembers me of Shocky's content back in the days, hope you never stop making these and never change lighting and bodies shapes, everything is perfect as it is now

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On 4/6/2021 at 10:40 PM, Jayomms said:

Nice Work on the suspense build up. ;):thumbsup: 

 

Thanks! I am so glad you find it suspenseful. Its always hard to tell with comic and pictures if I was able to convey spooky-ness and tension when I have been staring at the scenes, cells, and screenshots several times.

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15 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Marvelously done. Love the lesbian scene at the end. :D

 

Thanks! I really dont know why, but I tend to enjoy lesbian scenes more so than straight heterosexual scenes for some reason. Especially with my Dark Ascension comic, the balance between lesbian scenes vs heterosexual scenes is so severely unbalanced, I cant think of a chapter where Malicia hasnt commented on the dangers of girls kissing and licking each others "pee pee" :P

 

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2 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

 

Thanks! I really dont know why, but I tend to enjoy lesbian scenes more so than straight heterosexual scenes for some reason. Especially with my Dark Ascension comic, the balance between lesbian scenes vs heterosexual scenes is so severely unbalanced, I cant think of a chapter where Malicia hasnt commented on the dangers of girls kissing and licking each others "pee pee" :P

 

 

> I'm glad you did and as bisexual I can tell you that great majority of males rather loves to see lesbian sex than straight sex, just like my Prince. He can watch straight sex for hours and he isn't horny at all, but seeing me smooching with my Ivy, he has very strong erection. :)

 

> As for  ( @Tirloque)  Trilog's Malicija, she is bisexual too. Here is the proof:

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Besides, some LL members like @Resdayn and my Prince claims she loves horses. Enormously. I can't tell, but you know, where there is a smoke, there is a fire, too. ;)

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Hmm, looks like I've got one chapter to catch up. Will do so in the next few days. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

4 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Thanks! I really dont know why, but I tend to enjoy lesbian scenes more so than straight heterosexual scenes for some reason. Especially with my Dark Ascension comic, the balance between lesbian scenes vs heterosexual scenes is so severely unbalanced, I cant think of a chapter where Malicia hasnt commented on the dangers of girls kissing and licking each others "pee pee"

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I very comment 'cause your gals very need to get warned. Cassandra wouldn't have turned into a dried grandma if she had gotten expert advice before, you see ? :classic_lightbulb: »

 

1 hour ago, EvalovesEP said:

> I'm glad you did and as bisexual I can tell you that great majority of males rather loves to see lesbian sex than straight sex, just like my Prince. He can watch straight sex for hours and he isn't horny at all, but seeing me smooching with my Ivy, he has very strong erection.

Having several females for one male is also a common phantasm among men. That might play a role in lesbian sex popularity among straight males. 🤔

 

1 hour ago, EvalovesEP said:

> As for  ( @Tirloque)  Trilog's Malicija, she is bisexual too. Here is the proof:

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Besides, some LL members like @Resdayn and my Prince claims she loves horses. Enormously. I can't tell, but you know, where there is a smoke, there is a fire, too.

ldyMRSUy_o.png « That's very not me, no, 'cause I've got green eyes.

 

               And about riding horses the wrong way, that can't be me either 'cause I'm a fish, and fishes don't ride horses, you know ?

 

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16 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Hmm, looks like I've got one chapter to catch up. Will do so in the next few days. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I very comment 'cause your gals very need to get warned. Cassandra wouldn't have turned into a dried grandma if she had gotten expert advice before, you see ? :classic_lightbulb: »

 

 

 

 

> 🤣😂😅

 

> as for fantasy, you also are right. Some females fantasise about having two man, but not me. I have one woman and one man. One cock is enough for me but I love more pussies :D

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6 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

> 🤣😂😅

 

> as for fantasy, you also are right. Some females fantasise about having two man, but not me. I have one woman and one man. One cock is enough for me but I love more pussies :D

 

Oh Silly Evee! :sweat_smile:

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On 4/7/2021 at 7:57 PM, Slace said:

pls pls pls pls dont kill Selenia shes so hot i absolutely love her

 

this is i think the first time i comment on your story and i would like to say that your overall characters bodies, lighting, and everything else remembers me of Shocky's content back in the days, hope you never stop making these and never change lighting and bodies shapes, everything is perfect as it is now


hey thanks for the comments! Always enjoy hearing from new people! 
I didn’t know Shocks had a comic series as well, which I will need to go an look it up!

 

Can’t promise anything however :P

 

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On 4/7/2021 at 8:20 PM, Elf Prince said:

Did you change your story telling style? I am not saing that is bad but different. Compliments for very good episode.


-As far as style, I guess I would say evolution over time writing these comics and finding a specific look, layout, and story.  
 

-Anything specific? As much has changed in many ways since my earlier chapters in 2018!

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20 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Hmm, looks like I've got one chapter to catch up. Will do so in the next few days. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 


 No worries! Once I got through all that psychological self-actualization stuff in chapter 11,  it should be easier as it’s mostly straight action stuff. But also I’m releasing the parts one at a time whereas it takes at least a month between submissions when I release 2 to 3 parts in one blog post. 

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19 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

> 🤣😂😅

 

> as for fantasy, you also are right. Some females fantasise about having two man, but not me. I have one woman and one man. One cock is enough for me but I love more pussies :D


ok, that makes so much sense now!  Esp why Slash fanfics and shipping are so popular !

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14 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great work!

The the atmosphere is really well crafted!

Also such a clickbait header image :O.

Thanks! 
I was going for horror movie feel  with the all wood, basement. But again, hard to tell if it works in comic format versus movie.


I actually thought about redoing the header image and insert two or three of the people Selenia comes across at the. beginning of part 3  facing  tied up Selenia. 
 

But yeah, I have noticed somewhat of a  correlation between the header images and the number of views.

-clearly visible frontal nudity versus rear nudity is one I noticed

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23 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

 

> 🤣😂😅

 

> as for fantasy, you also are right. Some females fantasise about having two man, but not me. I have one woman and one man. One cock is enough for me but I love more pussies :D

 

That is because you are crazy witch 😛

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9 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

But yeah, I have noticed somewhat of a  correlation between the header images and the number of views.

-clearly visible frontal nudity versus rear nudity is one I noticed

I did notice one face vs no face for my chronicles ; particularly if it's a female face.

 

Or by re-using too often the same header (which can be confusing for readers). 🤔

 

9 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:


 No worries! Once I got through all that psychological self-actualization stuff in chapter 11,  it should be easier as it’s mostly straight action stuff. But also I’m releasing the parts one at a time whereas it takes at least a month between submissions when I release 2 to 3 parts in one blog post. 

All caught up ! Liked the investigation ambiance on this one. The assets were familiar (lol for the Old Hroldan :classic_biggrin:), but reorganized in a unique mix, with unique lighting and disposition. Nice build-up for the protagonist « assets » (the stare of the villager going below the eyes when being distracted was funny as well ^^). Yet, for someone with long ears, her not earing Mort's associates plotting against her was a bit strange ; and same for her getting caught by surprise after using her ethereal detection powers. Nice reaction to Jenna's  reveal, though I wonder why the other delinquents don't show up (were they killed without Selenia noticing ?). Great implementation of the comic layout and onomatopoeia that being said, it flows naturally. And having Jenna as an antagonist indeed brings novelty. Anyway, nice entry ! :smiley:

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « Even though both those gals already have Chlamydia, I still think there's going to be a problem, uh. 

 

               Also Jenna said I said something about her in the showers, but I very don't remember going to a shower lately, no. :classic_angel: »

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Have to agree with what others have said about the lighting and suspenseful staging, great job!

 

At parts it reminded me of your Secrets Under the Stairs entry from way back when.

 

The fact that Jenna curses normally (sans Ys) is a funny way to mark her as being from a different reality 🤣

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