The names of those two Dwemer Fairies is what shocked me. 

3 minutes ago, Jayomms said:

The names of those two Dwemer Fairies is what shocked me. 

Shh!  Let's see if he/she/they notice!  

Great work!

Some of the font is a bit small and a bit too hard to read, but it was an enjoyable read nonetheless.  

lovely , Adrea , keep on trying , the dress is nice , waiting to see how it's going , thank you  ?

8 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great work!

Some of the font is a bit small and a bit too hard to read, but it was an enjoyable read nonetheless.  

Glad you enjoy it, Alter!  2 things are contributing to the small text.  
1.  By design!  Especially in the Black screens, I was trying to simulate Adrea passing out and hearing less and less.  so if it was hard to read then mission accomplished.  

2.  Picture Resolution.  I think there's an issue with either the Hosting Site or LL not displaying the images at max resolution.  I thought I was grabbing the OG size link.  I'll have to make sure my hosting site isn't doing anything like that.  

3 hours ago, wilson99 said:

lovely , Adrea , keep on trying , the dress is nice , waiting to see how it's going , thank you  ?

Glad you enjoyed it!  She'll get out of there...  Eventually...

Still as bewitching as ever. Loving to dive into your stories, they're always immersive in terms of universe and whereabouts, and visually as smooth as the protagonists' looks. This one was quite short, but scenario-wise provided (and solved) some mystery ; and quite the dose of humor. Nothing to say regarding the clean visuals and poses, aside that I think that going for very large resolutions (2560 x1440) but over-compressing them isn't a good choice, as it creates artifacts around the red objects (for example the text of MalMal). I'd go for a resolution between 1600x900 and 1920x1080, but with a compression around 95 if I were you. Still, quite the pleasant entry overall.

Kudos for the dialogues, I winced at the first mention of the Taribelle name (Tabrielle's anagram), with a suspicion becoming even greater with the Tari surname. And laughed quite a bit during the final introductions. ^^ Didn't guess if the Mallemuck over Marsoric was another easter egg.

On 10/25/2020 at 6:23 AM, djregs said:

On 10/25/2020 at 6:19 AM, Jayomms said:

The names of those two Dwemer Fairies is what shocked me. 

Shh!  Let's see if he/she/they notice!  

Malicia : « I very noticed :

               - The white one is called Tari because of my sister Tabi.

               - And the red one is called Malicia because of me, uh. And it said very intelligent things too, yes. 

              Also Adrea's always very pretty, but she doesn't uses the electricity spell right, no. It's the meany creatures that must be toasted inside, not the caster. That's what Tabi does.  »

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Still as bewitching as ever. Loving to dive into your stories, they're always immersive in terms of universe and whereabouts, and visually as smooth as the protagonists' looks. This one was quite short, but scenario-wise provided (and solved) some mystery ; and quite the dose of humor. Nothing to say regarding the clean visuals and poses, aside that I think that going for very large resolutions (2560 x1440) but over-compressing them isn't a good choice, as it creates artifacts around the red objects (for example the text of MalMal). I'd go for a resolution between 1600x900 and 1920x1080, but with a compression around 95 if I were you. Still, quite the pleasant entry overall.

 

Kudos for the dialogues, I winced at the first mention of the Taribelle name (Tabrielle's anagram), with a suspicion becoming even greater with the Tari surname. And laughed quite a bit during the final introductions. ^^ Didn't guess if the Mallemuck over Marsoric was another easter egg.

Malicia : « I very noticed :

              

               - The white one is called Tari because of my sister Tabi.

               - And the red one is called Malicia because of me, uh. And it said very intelligent things too, yes. 

 

              Also Adrea's always very pretty, but she doesn't uses the electricity spell right, no. It's the meany creatures that must be toasted inside, not the caster. That's what Tabi does.  »

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Nothing to say regarding the clean visuals and poses, aside that I think that going for very large resolutions (2560 x1440) but over-compressing them isn't a good choice, as it creates artifacts around the red objects (for example the text of MalMal). I'd go for a resolution between 1600x900 and 1920x1080, but with a compression around 95 if I were you. Still, quite the pleasant entry overall.

 

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Kudos for the dialogues, I winced at the first mention of the Taribelle name (Tabrielle's anagram), with a suspicion becoming even greater with the Tari surname. And laughed quite a bit during the final introductions. ^^ Didn't guess if the Mallemuck over Marsoric was another easter egg.

This particular reference has been a long time coming!  Originally, I wanted to throw in the Debonaire or Labyrinth Inc Stories, but they just felt out of place!  So I consider my 2020 complete now that I've alluded to another inspiration in my entry.  Besides, I find bickering sisters to be humorous and I'm so happy they have a place now and in the future!   

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « I very noticed :

              

               - The white one is called Tari because of my sister Tabi.

               - And the red one is called Malicia because of me, uh. And it said very intelligent things too, yes. 

 

              Also Adrea's always very pretty, but she doesn't uses the electricity spell right, no. It's the meany creatures that must be toasted inside, not the caster. That's what Tabi does.  »

 

This is a different form of magic than what you're used to Malicia!  You'll see more about it in the next entry.  ?   Also, you're in the story now, anything you want to do?  

4 hours ago, djregs said:

That gif is hilarious. ^^

I'm alluding to the tuning of the JPEG compression. Some software (such as Irfanview) allow you to fine tune that compression from 0 to 100 instead of 0 to 10.

4 hours ago, djregs said:

This particular reference has been a long time coming!  Originally, I wanted to throw in the Debonaire or Labyrinth Inc Stories, but they just felt out of place!  So I consider my 2020 complete now that I've alluded to another inspiration in my entry.  Besides, I find bickering sisters to be humorous and I'm so happy they have a place now and in the future!   

I see, so it's a double reference then !

Malicia : « I've never bickered with Tabi, no !

               I'm just very superiorly intelligent and she knows it.  »

4 hours ago, djregs said:

This is a different form of magic than what you're used to Malicia!  You'll see more about it in the next entry.  ?   Also, you're in the story now, anything you want to do?  

Malicia : « Hmm ? Let me see... I feel like... eatin' a cookie right now.

                Also Adrea needs to see that I'm very pretty too. So I need to wear a dress just like her's.  »

So happy and fun, what a delightful read!

6 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

So happy and fun, what a delightful read!

Glad you enjoyed!  Too much depressing stuff going on this year.  Glad I'm able to make one person happy ? 

19 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Hmm ? Let me see... I feel like... eatin' a cookie right now.

 

                Also Adrea needs to see that I'm very pretty too. So I need to wear a dress just like her's.  »

*Feverishly looks up mods to put a dress on a Dwemer Fairy*  

*Comes up Negative*

What kind of cookie would you like!  

5 hours ago, djregs said:

*Feverishly looks up mods to put a dress on a Dwemer Fairy*  

*Comes up Negative*

Malicia : « That's very disturbing. It means I'd have to meet with my friends without clothes. Only the Romans could do that, uh.  »

5 hours ago, djregs said:

*Feverishly looks up mods to put a dress on a Dwemer Fairy*  

*Comes up Negative*

Maybe by jaxonzning the floor version of some clothes ? I think it also allows for some scaling. ?

5 hours ago, djregs said:

What kind of cookie would you like!  

Malicia : « This kind ->

               * 150g of flour

               * 100g of sugar

               * 50 g of butter

               * one egg (not rotten, no)

               * one bag of vanilla sugar

               * a tiny spoon of baking powder

               You can add chocolate chips if you want, yes.

                If you don't know how to make cookies, then bake another cake instead, uh. »

hope she gets out!