thank you as beautiful as ever , waiting for more  ?

Yay, Adria's back! Glad to see her back in action, hope she manages to escape soon so we can see her in more "action" ?

13 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Someone's excited ? 

10 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you as beautiful as ever , waiting for more  ?

I hope to keep writing more!  So long as the computer lasts.  

5 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Yay, Adria's back! Glad to see her back in action, hope she manages to escape soon so we can see her in more "action" ?

It's been a long 8 months of R&R for Adrea.  She's probably itching for some sort of action... and maybe another set of clothes 

3 hours ago, djregs said:

Someone's excited ? 

So it's been 8 months since your last chapter? 

1 hour ago, Jayomms said:

So it's been 8 months since your last chapter? 

Feb 12th was the last "story" entry for Adrea.  So it's been about 7 or 8 months since that time.  The rest have been ideas that never got off the ground or One-Shots (Like the poker entry!).  

fun story, she is pretty 

20 hours ago, BoBCostco said:

fun story, she is pretty 

Glad you enjoyed!  It's just the start of a bigger story.  

If you want to see more of Adrea, have the look at this entry! It's the collection of her stories since I started.    

A beautiful lady,

great visuals, 

good effects,

Enjoyable read ?

8 hours ago, WANOBI12 said:

A beautiful lady,

great visuals, 

good effects,

Enjoyable read ?

Glad you enjoyed it!  Also, Welcome back!  You took a break from LL for a while!  

On 9/28/2020 at 3:39 PM, djregs said:

Someone's excited ? 

 

I hope to keep writing more!  So long as the computer lasts.  

 

It's been a long 8 months of R&R for Adrea.  She's probably itching for some sort of action... and maybe another set of clothes 

 

Wow! And I thought I took long breaks around here ?

1 hour ago, SpyVsPie said:

Wow! And I thought I took long breaks around here ?

I was all slated to give Adrea a bit of a break, work on some other story concepts, then pick it back up in June or July. 

Well.... Then Quarantine Happened, and computer parts started randomly dying.  

I did complete some partial stories.  But, Adrea just posed for a few one-shots and enjoyed her vacation. .  

On 9/30/2020 at 1:25 PM, djregs said:

Glad you enjoyed!  It's just the start of a bigger story.  

 

If you want to see more of Adrea, have the look at this entry! It's the collection of her stories since I started.    

  

I will ck it out, thanks!

On 10/1/2020 at 7:10 PM, djregs said:

I was all slated to give Adrea a bit of a break, work on some other story concepts, then pick it back up in June or July. 

 

Well.... Then Quarantine Happened, and computer parts started randomly dying.  

I did complete some partial stories.  But, Adrea just posed for a few one-shots and enjoyed her vacation. .  

Dying computer parts ?. The stuff of nightmares. At least it looks like you were able to save the important stuff (presets, etc.)

Almost missed this one ! Liked the in-res-media, with the story then catching up explaining how she ended in her luxurious book trap ; and the original setup for it (the cube, the book trap, the airship). All of it created a mesmerizing and very immersive setting. Not to mention some bubbles were pleasantly outlined, and the as neat as ever screenshots. Good job on the effects as well (the aspiration into the book in particular). It also seemed to me that the magic flying creatures were retouched somehow. Anyway, awaiting eagerly for the next chapter ! ?

Malicia : « Adrea's still very intelligent and very pretty. I hope she gets healed very quickly and doesn't gets trapped at the proctor doctor's place for too long, no.  »

On 10/2/2020 at 9:46 PM, SpyVsPie said:

Dying computer parts ?. The stuff of nightmares. At least it looks like you were able to save the important stuff (presets, etc.)

It was very scary.  But Adrea made the move and also is taking up a little bit of space on the cloud.  We'll see how the bigger transition goes, when the new machine comes around.  In the meantime, picture resolution has increased, so that's cool.  

5 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Almost missed this one ! Liked the in-res-media, with the story then catching up explaining how she ended in her luxurious book trap ; and the original setup for it (the cube, the book trap, the airship). All of it created a mesmerizing and very immersive setting. Not to mention some bubbles were pleasantly outlined, and the as neat as ever screenshots. Good job on the effects as well (the aspiration into the book in particular). It also seemed to me that the magic flying creatures were retouched somehow. Anyway, awaiting eagerly for the next chapter ! ?

 

Malicia : « Adrea's still very intelligent and very pretty. I hope she gets healed very quickly and doesn't gets trapped at the proctor doctor's place for too long, no.  »

So I did nothing to the Faeries at all!  That's just how they look in game.  Cool, huh?  Also, do you think all the text boxes need outlines?  Open to feedback on that.  

Hi Malicia!  Long time no see!  Don't you get lost in a good book from time to time?  I think you should go to the proctor doctor's place some time too!  

1 hour ago, djregs said:

So I did nothing to the Faeries at all!  That's just how they look in game.  Cool, huh?  Also, do you think all the text boxes need outlines?  Open to feedback on that. 

Outlines are a finish choice to better separate the bubbles from the images. So IMO, if you deem it necessary for some, then better do it for all. It doesn't have to be as strong nor the same color though, and I have clear outlines for dark bubbles, and darker ones for bright ones.

1 hour ago, djregs said:

Hi Malicia!  Long time no see!  Don't you get lost in a good book from time to time?  I think you should go to the proctor doctor's place some time too!  

Malicia : « I almost never have hemorrhoids, so I don't need to go to the proctor doctor, no.

               I can get lost in some books, but when I wake up only my face is on the book, not the whole of me.  »

Always great to see more Adrea! (and a nice choice for story cover image ?)

As gorgeous as the young enchantress-in-training is, I am extremely curious about Mal Mal and Tari.  We'll find out more about them as the time goes on, right? Please say 'yes'. ?

Sorry I don't remember if you mentioned it, but is the location that Adrea is in (the pool with the statues) custom made or is it a mod? It looks really beautiful.

Hope your computer gets fixed and we'll see more of your stories soon.

Great job! ?

3 hours ago, Devianna said:

Always great to see more Adrea! (and a nice choice for story cover image ?)

As gorgeous as the young enchantress-in-training is, I am extremely curious about Mal Mal and Tari.  We'll find out more about them as the time goes on, right? Please say 'yes'. ?

 

3 hours ago, Devianna said:

Sorry I don't remember if you mentioned it, but is the location that Adrea is in (the pool with the statues) custom made or is it a mod? It looks really beautiful.

Hope your computer gets fixed and we'll see more of your stories soon.

Great job! ?

Don't have the skill nor hardware to create something that pretty!  Check out the spoiler below for a link to the mod:  
 

Beautiful Location.  Makes my PC explode.  But even Among Us makes my PC explode these days.... 

Really cute story! You know I’ve never thought of using that Cube like a companion cube. i was getting Wheatley/R2D2

vibes from it and hope we get to see it again

On the last two pics, it did take me a few extra seconds to figure out to whom the red and white bubbles were coming from. I don’t know if it’s because of the white text bubble, but it took me a few moments to notice the two flying machines (though really pretty looking btw). Maybe have one shot  much closer to one of them in the foreground with the other in the mid/background?

On 10/23/2020 at 7:44 PM, devious-Drunna said:

Really cute story! You know I’ve never thought of using that Cube like a companion cube. i was getting Wheatley/R2D2

vibes from it and hope we get to see it again

Cubie is great!  He's supposed to be like dubstep BB8/R2D2 you can see more below!

On 10/23/2020 at 7:44 PM, devious-Drunna said:

On the last two pics, it did take me a few extra seconds to figure out to whom the red and white bubbles were coming from. I don’t know if it’s because of the white text bubble, but it took me a few moments to notice the two flying machines (though really pretty looking btw). Maybe have one shot  much closer to one of them in the foreground with the other in the mid/background?

Yeah, some times they pop, other times they kinda fade into the background.  I think you'll see the same issue with the next entry.  I'll think about what can be done about it for the 3rd one...