First off, holy shit the changes of showing her as a slave in chains,  second, FUUUUCK that monster <,< kill it with fire and bugspray! third, nooooo gwyns powers T.T   Awesome chapter !!! cant wait for more !!! gjpojgaopsdg

? Guess who's back, back again. Res is back, for the win!

A dream within a dream, skyception!

Good job! Really agree with Jay, that hairstyle suits her well!
But still you entries lacking of a demon sex and good ol' horse cocks ^_^
and less of purging this time ^_^

Very ominous! Nice work on the transitions both in and out of the dream. It made it seem like the dream nightmare never really ended. Some strong, creepy vibes! Well done!

On 5/31/2020 at 3:04 PM, Xonsamdi said:

First off, holy shit the changes of showing her as a slave in chains,  second, FUUUUCK that monster <,< kill it with fire and bugspray! third, nooooo gwyns powers T.T   Awesome chapter !!! cant wait for more !!! gjpojgaopsdg

Thank you ?

It meant to showcase her own experiences of the place, specifically of the temple. ?

Make sense, she can't use anything, she in sphere of the Tormenter.

On 5/31/2020 at 4:34 PM, Deso561PL said:

? Guess who's back, back again. Res is back, for the win!

Yep ?

On 5/31/2020 at 5:53 PM, Jayomms said:

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I Love her hair in this shot, looks really good on her! 

 

Its a reference of her prologue look actually. ?

On 5/31/2020 at 6:36 PM, SpyVsPie said:

A dream within a dream, skyception!

Pretty much.

12 hours ago, Crw said:

Good job! Really agree with Jay, that hairstyle suits her well!
But still you entries lacking of a demon sex and good ol' horse cocks ^_^
and less of purging this time ^_^

Thank you ?

Seems shorthair gwynolda actually getting popular.

We already got some demons already, only Malicia can bring horse cocks now.

45 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Very ominous! Nice work on the transitions both in and out of the dream. It made it seem like the dream nightmare never really ended. Some strong, creepy vibes! Well done!

Thank you ?

I intended to make a strong dark pressence, lack of safety and more darkness there..

Nightmare never ended hehe, she just switched a bit place.

Interesting entry. I liked how you progressively added the scars and chains as she was thinking of the suffering she had in the temple. Though now that she mention it, it's strange they mistreated her despite knowing her to be the sybil. Now the staging was good, with a nice horror feeling and a demon well brought in (not litteraly =p). Appreciated the scene changes just as it was turning real bad, though that seemed like a favor done to her by Vaermina's champion. Great lighting, ambiance and posing regarding the screens ; and a rather concise and more efficient than usual writing style. And I'm glad you didn't sacrificed the length this time. Good job !

Malicia : « I never imagined the Dibellan artist were so meany. Nor so ugly and dirty, no, it's like they had the feet of a goat. No wonder she doesn't like them, no.  »

On 6/1/2020 at 9:05 AM, Crw said:

But still you entries lacking of a demon sex and good ol' horse cocks ^_^

Malicia : « I very agree. But only if you're the one using his poo-poo to honey-honey with the demon first, uh.  »

Yay! So glad to see that you're back to writing stories! And we get a continuation of Gwynolda's tale in a very interesting and haunting episode. ?

It looks like there are three voices that are speaking in Gwynolda's dream. One is her own, another seems to be the Tormentor and I wonder whether the third one is Arkay ? We already saw him giving a sword to Gwynolda back in Riften in the temple of Mara and here in a dream we see another sword appear. Arkay was also the one who pointed out that Dibella has forsaken her until Gwyn proves that she's deserving of the Divine favor and passes a trial.

I really liked how all of Tormentor's lines always indicate something cruel or painful "torture, slavery, sinner" and Arkay's ones (or whoever the third speaker is) are all more practical "something is off with the temple, better take the weapon".

The demon scene was really well-made and REALLY disturbing. Even without showing any of the gruesome details every screenshot was still filled with the sense of agonizing horror. Poor, poor Gwynolda. She has already suffered so much and now she's being reminded of everything in a twisted way. ?

The screenshots were as gorgeous as ever! This one was one of my favorites:

Wonderful work and I'm eagerly waiting to see what happens next! ?

thank you i love your Gwynolda and her fantastic stories , please some more ? ?

21 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Interesting entry. I liked how you progressively added the scars and chains as she was thinking of the suffering she had in the temple. Though now that she mention it, it's strange they mistreated her despite knowing her to be the sybil. Now the staging was good, with a nice horror feeling and a demon well brought in (not litteraly =p). Appreciated the scene changes just as it was turning real bad, though that seemed like a favor done to her by Vaermina's champion. Great lighting, ambiance and posing regarding the screens ; and a rather concise and more efficient than usual writing style. And I'm glad you didn't sacrificed the length this time. Good job !

 

Malicia : « I never imagined the Dibellan artist were so meany. Nor so ugly and dirty, no, it's like they had the feet of a goat. No wonder she doesn't like them, no.  »

Malicia : « I very agree. But only if you're the one using his poo-poo to honey-honey with the demon first, uh.  »

 

Thank you ?

Well general idea was making like a re-live, all scars, chains, hair cut are references for her life. The parts we know well from the earlier chapters, its a subtle way how the Champion make her suffer.

Gwynolda questions a lot, but so are everyone else. Maybe the dreams uncover some hidden memories or dark secret, who knows.

I decided to put less on the scenery, the way horror works in my mind and generally I think we saw enough. He may stopped it becoming more, but we know he is not doing favor.

Gwynolda already distressed a lot and the true nightmare just starts now.

17 hours ago, Devianna said:

Yay! So glad to see that you're back to writing stories! And we get a continuation of Gwynolda's tale in a very interesting and haunting episode. ?

 

It looks like there are three voices that are speaking in Gwynolda's dream. One is her own, another seems to be the Tormentor and I wonder whether the third one is Arkay ? We already saw him giving a sword to Gwynolda back in Riften in the temple of Mara and here in a dream we see another sword appear. Arkay was also the one who pointed out that Dibella has forsaken her until Gwyn proves that she's deserving of the Divine favor and passes a trial.

 

I really liked how all of Tormentor's lines always indicate something cruel or painful "torture, slavery, sinner" and Arkay's ones (or whoever the third speaker is) are all more practical "something is off with the temple, better take the weapon".

 

The demon scene was really well-made and REALLY disturbing. Even without showing any of the gruesome details every screenshot was still filled with the sense of agonizing horror. Poor, poor Gwynolda. She has already suffered so much and now she's being reminded of everything in a twisted way. ?

 

The screenshots were as gorgeous as ever! This one was one of my favorites:

 

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Wonderful work and I'm eagerly waiting to see what happens next! ?

Thank you ?

Been a while, came from totally unexpected, but we got a full horror Gwynolda story chapter now. ?

Yes, generally the way Gwynolda thinks or word, can affect more, purple the Tormentor and favors making things worsers, while other helps her more and generally aim to do something ?

Two voice can hinder or assist her in the nightmare, we know the Tormentor, but who is the other? Good question, but seems an ally of her.

Arkay did assited her a lot during the purge, but since Alyssa more or less resolved by Gauis in the city or by herself, not sure if Arkay is still assist her ?

Indeed, I wanted make something true nightmare and horror for Gwynolda, seems I managed right ?

My intention was a shocking scene, for both the audience and both for Gwynolda herself.

4 hours ago, wilson99 said:

thank you i love your Gwynolda and her fantastic stories , please some more ? ?

Thank you ?

Absolutely terrifying and thrilling... ... never to know what is dream, reality or ...something else

Thankfully Gwynolda is not overly bothered and keeps her faith.

Nice work! And I thought my upcoming chapter was gonna be a bit trippy! I also love her short hair!
I also love how clean and crisp your screenshots look as well!

What gargoyle morning are you using for the creature?

On 6/3/2020 at 7:16 PM, worik said:

Absolutely terrifying and thrilling... ... never to know what is dream, reality or ...something else

Thankfully Gwynolda is not overly bothered and keeps her faith.

Thank you ?

Lets say, its kinda all what you sad there hehe ?

Gwynolda is bothered a lot, she just knows something not really up.

7 hours ago, devious-Drunna said:

Nice work! And I thought my upcoming chapter was gonna be a bit trippy! I also love her short hair!
I also love how clean and crisp your screenshots look as well!

 

What gargoyle morning are you using for the creature?

Thank you ?

Ohhhh dear haha, now thats something if my chapter can make you think that, considering your work haha.

Seems short hair Gwynolda is really popular ?

Its not a gargoyle, its a demon from one of the LL mods.

Nice job with the transition to the scars and short hair, very dream like and spooky!