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Missing Students case: Prologue


Resdayn

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Missing Students case:

Prologue

 

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Been a while Melissa, haven't see you since I started the University. I was suprised you called me for a meeting here..

 

I know, I know Abigail, but I have big news...

 

Ohhh really? Tell me

 

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I dropped out from the university, to be an private investigator. There are too many missing students in this town.. Someone has to look into it, if the law refuses to it...

 

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Melissa...

 

I wanted ask you to join with me and investigate this case together..

 

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You dropped out from the University to be a just private detective? .... Are you out of your mind?

 

You don't even have leads.

 

Do you understand how dangerous this is? Lets assume you found a lead, and might uncover who are behind of it, then what?

 

You gone missing as well, cause what would protect you against who or what is behind of it? What will happen?

 

Nobody gonna help or protect you there, you going to be alone in the dark, suffocating, your neck has a hand wrapped around, close to almost break it.

 

Your body get descreated and gutted and thrown into the river.

 

Rethink that a bit Melissa, before you do anything stupid.

 

I will leave now.

 

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I found some leads what to the local Bar, all girls who went missing...

 

Were there for a drink...

 

Should be my first place to seek..

 

Abigail can word as much she want it, I still do it... she will see it.

 

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The Bar is an old small building.. in the down parts of the city...  

 

I will check it..

 

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There are too many suspicious things in this city, as the night reach it..

 

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1 hour ago, donttouchmethere said:

Uh! This could get interesting :classic_ph34r:

Hopefully it will hehe.

53 minutes ago, Jessywulfe said:

this looks noice

 

Thank you.

14 minutes ago, Crw said:

It's a really small one, but really promising! Wating for what's coming! ^_^

Well more like a prologue teaser of the remake.

 

I don't have a lot of time to make a bigger thing.

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A fun little introduction to what could be a very interesting story. 😃 

 

I hope there's more to come! 

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I won't lie, I was surprised by how fast it ended. XD Now the ambiance and setting are certainly interesting, as well as the visual identity you've customized from those Sims shots. The written part would've also been quite good if not for that long, breathless tirade from Abigail, you rushed that a bit. Interesting premise nonetheless ! :smiley:

 

Malicia : « I very like the heroine. : she has a very good sounding name, and is very afraid of nothing. Just like me, yes. :classic_sleepy: »

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3 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

👌

😃

3 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Nice work

Thanks

3 hours ago, LexiAJ82 said:

A fun little introduction to what could be a very interesting story. 😃 

 

I hope there's more to come! 

There will if my time allows it.

22 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

I won't lie, I was surprised by how fast it ended. XD Now the ambiance and setting are certainly interesting, as well as the visual identity you've customized from those Sims shots. The written part would've also been quite good if not for that long, breathless tirade from Abigail, you rushed that a bit. Interesting premise nonetheless ! :smiley:

 

Malicia : « I very like the heroine. : she has a very good sounding name, and is very afraid of nothing. Just like me, yes. :classic_sleepy: »

Its the remake of the old concept story beginning, library, the investigation start and Abigail and Melissa chattin,g of course situation and things are different, but start the same.

 

Thats the lenght, I have time for it, but this is just the short prologue, before the actual chapter with a lenght begin. 😛

 

What Breathless? They are all different sectences, she didn't said that with one breath, she try explain it slowly.  She made questions and each of them was in separate way in the text, I edited out the extra ".." cause it seems confusing for some readers. 😐

 

Curiosity kills the cat Malicia 😝

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29 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

What Breathless? They are all different sectences, she didn't said that with one breath, she try explain it slowly.  She made questions and each of them was in separate way in the text, I edited out the extra ".." cause it seems confusing for some readers. 😐

That's true, you corrected the problems of the overly long sentences since quite a moment now. But It looks like her answer escalates more and more, into a dramatic conclusion, into "goodbye", and without Melissa being ever able to place a word in-between. Hence, that felt rushed. :classic_wink:

36 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Curiosity kills the cat Malicia 😝

Malicia : « Then, you must very protect your cat, uh. :classic_sleep: »

 

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4 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

That's true, you corrected the problems of the overly long sentences since quite a moment now. But It looks like her answer escalates more and more, into a dramatic conclusion, into "goodbye", and without Melissa being ever able to place a word in-between. Hence, that felt rushed. :classic_wink:

 

I merely lacked the pics for the scenes, I don't have hours of freetime anymore. And spending a week to make a few pic is demoralising enough to just drop the entire thing and go full text. But I don't do full text works in LL, that has other places. 🤷‍♀️

 

I test out a new less time consuming structure with smaller pics, thats the prototype.

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Getting back into Sim Stories I see. Cool... I would like to see what you can do. Good luck... ;):thumbsup:

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Woohoo! The detective stories are back! And with a hint of mystery and possible horror! 😍

 

I love that Abigail gives a very rational and realistic reply when she hears Melissa's plans and the fact that she dropped out of college.  First words out of anyone's mouth would be the same : " Are you out of your mind?!"  Though I do fear for Melissa's safety I just cannot wait to find out what adventures will befall her!

 

Great introduction and of course - more please! 😊

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10 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Getting back into Sim Stories I see. Cool... I would like to see what you can do. Good luck... ;):thumbsup:

Thanks.

 

Im curious too, cause if I can make my plan it will be fun 😁

5 hours ago, Devianna said:

Woohoo! The detective stories are back! And with a hint of mystery and possible horror! 😍

 

I love that Abigail gives a very rational and realistic reply when she hears Melissa's plans and the fact that she dropped out of college.  First words out of anyone's mouth would be the same : " Are you out of your mind?!"  Though I do fear for Melissa's safety I just cannot wait to find out what adventures will befall her!

 

Great introduction and of course - more please! 😊

Thank you 😊

 

Mystery and Horror already confirmed, its my handy work 🥰, back to the detective seat and with Melissa, new complety reworked series.

 

I kinda wanted make a bit slight creepy-ness to Abigail rational and corrent reply on the potential dangers of the case, but she is worried.

 

Melissa's safety is not granted in anyway or anyshape, who knows what she find 😇

 

There will be more as my freetime allows it.

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Really nice job! Excited to see more! 

Was the prose written in a way as if each sentence was a chat bubble? Or were you going for poetry type format?

 

Your setup also reminds me of the Nancy Templeton stories (comic porn series parody of Nancy Drew)

https://www.luscious.net/albums/nancy_templeton_in_trouble_a_288202/read/?index=0

 

On 3/28/2020 at 1:05 PM, Resdayn said:

I merely lacked the pics for the scenes, I don't have hours of freetime anymore. And spending a week to make a few pic is demoralising enough . . . 

Oh my gosh, no kidding!

 

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ohhh : o good start not to revealing and not to little to grip : o hype to see where this goes! :D Also love the black and white layout of it  makes it like a old detective movie : 3

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On 3/30/2020 at 3:45 AM, devious-Drunna said:

Really nice job! Excited to see more! 

Was the prose written in a way as if each sentence was a chat bubble? Or were you going for poetry type format?

 

Your setup also reminds me of the Nancy Templeton stories (comic porn series parody of Nancy Drew)

https://www.luscious.net/albums/nancy_templeton_in_trouble_a_288202/read/?index=0

 

Oh my gosh, no kidding!

 

Thank you 😊

 

Generally tried to make it part of different sectences of Abigal, my shots are limited, due my work, I barely have enough time to make enough of it.

 

So its a bit weird for this prototype, generally like both :p.

 

Nancy Templeton inspired a bit of Melissa's outfit. Melissa's og outfit were an student girl one, but she is an adult girl from the uni, so I thought the classic Sherlock Holmes vibe look for her and the town itself is bit england vibe.

21 hours ago, Xonsamdi said:

ohhh : o good start not to revealing and not to little to grip : o hype to see where this goes! :D Also love the black and white layout of it  makes it like a old detective movie : 3

Thank you 😁

 

I aimed for the Noir vibe, it works well with my themes.

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This comment serves to be a response for the whole "purge of Riften" arc and everything after that which I am late on! (Sorry... 😬)

 

This was a fantastic arc that explained so much, while opening up so many more avenues to be explained! So first of all, Gauis (I know you showed me the reveal earlier, but I still gotta say this) is "not what I was expecting" ;) This reveal though was excellent. I love how the mask was removed and we moved from one face to the next. Makes me wonder if we have yet to see Gauis' true face all, or both of them are altered 🤔

 

It's great how this arc concluded in an open ended way. It established the characters in a great way for expansion and I'm excited to see where it goes!

 

Nightmare of the Dawn is continuing off perfectly. Vaermina's champion (not sure what to call him yet) is awesome! I love the shots of him appearing under Gwynolda's bed. Though we don't know much yet, I am hyped to see this already intriguing villain expand!

 

And last, but not least, this entry! About time you get started on it, haha. I love mystery stories! This is a great setup, so I can't wait to see where it goes!

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Nice setup, it seems much more focused and cohesive than some of your earlier stuff. I do agree with Tirloque that it felt like it ended a touch abruptly though. 

 

Still a big fan of the black and white filter for these, it's the only thing I have seen that makes sims graphics tolerable 😅

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13 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

Nice setup, it seems much more focused and cohesive than some of your earlier stuff. I do agree with Tirloque that it felt like it ended a touch abruptly though. 

 

Still a big fan of the black and white filter for these, it's the only thing I have seen that makes sims graphics tolerable 😅

Well I had way less time to make it, so it was more or less a test formart.

 

I tihnk its suit well the series and sims looks nice with it.

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