Loved the rosebush fighting scene! It's so clever and at the same time extremely amusing. ?

And Adrea turned out looking rather sinister in this screenshot, which is rather befitting her role in this story:

Varina made Cubie blush! That's some high-level magic right there. ? Her stamina for dancing is impressive as well!

It was very good to see Adrea and Rose make up. Also Sir Farce got what he deserved, so it's a happy ending all around! ?

(Of course we all know that the real heroes of this tale were Rose and Cubie, but don't tell Adrea that. )

Wonderful work and a very enjoyable story, which must've taken an enormous amount of time and effort. Really well-made and expertly written! All my compliments! ☺️

Excellent work Dj. I wished you kept dark hair at Andreja. You really improved with special effects and poses. Many compliments.

 That was an amazing fight scene with Rose IT! Great Yob! 

Got the notification, this time. And it was a great final chapter ! I specially enjoyed the fight, featuring several clever tides turn (literally ^^), with the bush dodges/feints and the table projection, making good use of the nature of the opponents and of the background elements. Graphically, while overall it was as good as ever with the effects, the lighting of the ship cabin looked somewhat bland and lessened the first scene a bit ; but the action was so great the reader would quickly forget about it. Also appreciated the usual touch of humor and wackiness, with Cubie rocking Varina's life all night long ! And the dialogues felt on point as well. ^^ Great entry ! ?

Malicia : « Rosie is very good at doing bushes and styling hair, yes. You should've very asked her to fix your hair from the start, Adrea.  »

6 hours ago, Devianna said:

Loved the rosebush fighting scene! It's so clever and at the same time extremely amusing. ?

And Adrea turned out looking rather sinister in this screenshot, which is rather befitting her role in this story:

 

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Varina made Cubie blush! That's some high-level magic right there. ? Her stamina for dancing is impressive as well!

 

It was very good to see Adrea and Rose make up. Also Sir Farce got what he deserved, so it's a happy ending all around! ?

(Of course we all know that the real heroes of this tale were Rose and Cubie, but don't tell Adrea that. )

 

Wonderful work and a very enjoyable story, which must've taken an enormous amount of time and effort. Really well-made and expertly written! All my compliments! ☺️

Adrea was the main antagonist here!  But because she's mostly the protagonist, I wanted to let her try on a different hat in the story. 

Rose and Cubie seemed like a natural fit to be her foil.  They were the only ones that knew something wasn't right with Adrea!  

I think Cubie x Varina may be a pairing I get behind in the future.  

I'm glad you enjoyed the story!  Thanks for the compliments!

4 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Excellent work Dj. I wished you kept dark hair at Andreja. You really improved with special effects and poses. Many compliments.

Thanks EP!  Sadly Evil Adrea must come to an end.  With her black hair, she'd be encroaching on too many other people's territories, like Varina!  

2 hours ago, Jayomms said:

 That was an amazing fight scene with Rose IT! Great Yob! 

Thank you!  It was one of the trickier ones to figure out on my end.  Glad it turned out well!  

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Got the notification, this time. And it was a great final chapter ! I specially enjoyed the fight, featuring several clever tides turn (literally ^^), with the bush dodges/feints and the table projection, making good use of the nature of the opponents and of the background elements. Graphically, while overall it was as good as ever with the effects, the lighting of the ship cabin looked somewhat bland and lessened the first scene a bit ; but the action was so great the reader would quickly forget about it. Also appreciated the usual touch of humor and wackiness, with Cubie rocking Varina's life all night long ! And the dialogues felt on point as well. ^^ Great entry ! ?

 

Malicia : « Rosie is very good at doing bushes and styling hair, yes. You should've very asked her to fix your hair from the start, Adrea.  »

Glad you enjoyed it!  There's absolutely nothing I can do about that ship cabin's native lighting  It just doesn't look good, but it's such a good venue for a fight, I couldn't pass it up!  I should probably find another ship.  Also, Adrea's magic seems to light up her face whenever she's holding it... who knew?!  Originally, the table wasn't supposed to be used. But, it seemed so natural that Adrea would use it that I rewrote the scene.  Glad it was one of the stand outs for you!  

Looks like we've got another Cubie x Varina Fan here!

Adrea:  It's so nice to finally be back to normal!  I just wish Rose didn't have to slap me! I have a welt now 

> I have only a praises for this entry Dj.

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Rosie is very good at doing bushes and styling hair, yes. You should've very asked her to fix your hair from the start, Adrea.  »

> My Prince and I have question for you, Malicija: What you gonna do about your big red bush?

thank you i liked the Evil side  , a very cool Story , lovely Pictures again and Happenings ! ?

39 minutes ago, EvalovesEP said:

> My Prince and I have question for you, Malicija: What you gonna do about your big red bush?

Malicia : « I gonna keep it very tidy and very neat as usual, yes.

                If you wanna give out expert advice about it, you can give it to Tabi and Tryade, uh.  »

1 hour ago, EvalovesEP said:

> I have only a praises for this entry Dj.

Thank you, Eva!  Glad you enjoyed!

58 minutes ago, wilson99 said:

thank you i liked the Evil side  , a very cool Story , lovely Pictures again and Happenings ! ?

I'm glad you liked the Evil Side, but it was a temporary transformation.  Maybe Adrea learned something during her stint as an Evil Sorceress?  

55 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « I gonna keep it very tidy and very neat as usual, yes.

 

                If you wanna give out expert advice about it, you can give it to Tabi and Tryade, uh.  »

Adrea:  Yes, Malicia... yes.  They can never know.  

1 hour ago, djregs said:

Adrea:  Yes, Malicia... yes.  They can never know.  

Malicia : « They very can't, no. They think that if you're looking very good and natural, it's that you've done nothing. But if you really had done nothing, it wouldn't look good at all, you see ?  »

Really enjoyable entry. Love the magical effects and the whole duel part. I guess it's pretty complicated to fight with an item, even if it's a daedric artifact. 

Tho I like the "evil side" of Adrea I'm glad everything end good ^_^

Great work ^_^

16 hours ago, Crw said:

Really enjoyable entry. Love the magical effects and the whole duel part. I guess it's pretty complicated to fight with an item, even if it's a daedric artifact. 

Tho I like the "evil side" of Adrea I'm glad everything end good ^_^

Great work ^_^

Glad you enjoyed!  

Fighting an item is just a big exercise of imagination constrained by what the program can actually handle and what makes sense.  I could dive in a bit more, but it gets boring .  

A lot of people are sad that Evil Adrea is gone.  I wonder if it's the look or the personality? 

4 minutes ago, djregs said:

Glad you enjoyed!  

Fighting an item is just a big exercise of imagination constrained by what the program can actually handle and what makes sense.  I could dive in a bit more, but it gets boring .  

A lot of people are sad that Evil Adrea is gone.  I wonder if it's the look or the personality? 

> I can say that my Prince is miss her black hair, not personality

4 hours ago, djregs said:

A lot of people are sad that Evil Adrea is gone.  I wonder if it's the look or the personality? 

Everything has it's own time and place, but I guess it's both ^_^

RIP big tiddy goth adrea ??

4 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

RIP big tiddy goth adrea ??

Slapped by a flower... One could say Rose brought the color back into her life... or her hair!