It's going down! 

Eira's carnation is so close to Adrea's they almost look like sisters. Anyway nice transcription of the "haunted" tomb atmosphere, with sudden and disconcerting changes to the characters, and Adrea setting up her twisted plans on the background. Btw, combining her back hair with her outfit gives her a more seductive style in the eyes of some people, particularly in the eyes of Prince and Eva I think. ^^ Also like the wacky and still lighthearted universe, with Cubie and Rosie on the go, the dance potion, and the enemies being more insect like than anything. Awaiting for Cubie and Rosie to do their job ! 

Malicia : « That Dior gal reminds me about Cecilde : she's very blonde, has big boobies, and chooses very silly guys, uh. Only she's more tanned maybe.

               She should very dump that Lance dude, he said meany things despite she trying to please him with pee-pee kissing.  »

Wow! She looks gorgeous. This hairstyle and color suites her better than red. If only Malicija would follow her example.

As for the story: it is greatly done. Playing with lights also makes better effect. All compliments. By the way, I found my new love among your girls

7 hours ago, Jayomms said:

It's going down! 

That's a very good summary of this episode!  Stuff is going down!  Whether it's Adrea's plan, Varina's booty, Eira's sanity, or just Dior in general, everything is going down 

5 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 Btw, combining her back hair with her outfit gives her a more seductive style in the eyes of some people, particularly in the eyes of Prince and Eva I think.

May Now he'll leave Felicia alone so she can do her job!  

5 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Eira's carnation is so close to Adrea's they almost look like sisters. Anyway nice transcription of the "haunted" tomb atmosphere, with sudden and disconcerting changes to the characters, and Adrea setting up her twisted plans on the background.  Also like the wacky and still lighthearted universe, with Cubie and Rosie on the go, the dance potion, and the enemies being more insect like than anything. Awaiting for Cubie and Rosie to do their job ! 

I haven't shared too much about Eira yet, other than what I said when I first introduced the Sylphs.  She might be worth examining a bit more in the future. 

The tone of this story is to be a bit WACKY with bits of Drama.  Adrea's not meant to be villainous person, honestly, I think she's about as threatening as this bat. 
 

So, the most believable way to sell her fall would be to add levity.  Just have to ensure she's still likable after an episode like this.    

Adrea:  They ARE insects... all of them.  I've just been really nice for so many years.  NOT TONIGHT!

^^^Comments like this don't help, Adrea!

5 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « That Dior gal reminds me about Cecilde : she's very blonde, has big boobies, and chooses very silly guys, uh. Only she's more tanned maybe.

               She should very dump that Lance dude, he said meany things despite she trying to please him with pee-pee kissing.  »

Adrea:  Dior's "Taking one for the team" while doing what she does best... . 

2 minutes ago, Elf Prince said:

Wow! She looks gorgeous. This hairstyle and color suites her better than red. If only Malicija would follow her example.

 

As for the story: it is greatly done. Playing with lights also makes better effect. All compliments. By the way, I found my new love among your girls

 

 

Eira's never been a red-head, but she is kinda cute.  Hopefully we'll see more of her in the future.  If she can ever escape that tomb!  

As for Varina, I'll just leave this right here:

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Eira's carnation is so close to Adrea's they almost look like sisters. Anyway nice transcription of the "haunted" tomb atmosphere, with sudden and disconcerting changes to the characters, and Adrea setting up her twisted plans on the background. Btw, combining her back hair with her outfit gives her a more seductive style in the eyes of some people, particularly in the eyes of Prince and Eva I think. ^^

Hahahahahahha. You know us too well. Eva and I have same taste about the girls, while Ivy isn't picky. Hahahahahaha.

Damn! I love this new pretty badass and sexy look of Adrea way more ^_^ 
Great job ^_^
 

5 hours ago, djregs said:

That's a very good summary of this episode!  Stuff is going down!  Whether it's Adrea's plan, Varina's booty, Eira's sanity, or just Dior in general, everything is going down 

 

May Now he'll leave Felicia alone so she can do her job!  

 

I haven't shared too much about Eira yet, other than what I said when I first introduced the Sylphs.  She might be worth examining a bit more in the future. 

The tone of this story is to be a bit WACKY with bits of Drama.  Adrea's not meant to be villainous person, honestly, I think she's about as threatening as this bat. 
 

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So, the most believable way to sell her fall would be to add levity.  Just have to ensure she's still likable after an episode like this.    

 

Adrea:  They ARE insects... all of them.  I've just been really nice for so many years.  NOT TONIGHT!

 

^^^Comments like this don't help, Adrea!

 

Adrea:  Dior's "Taking one for the team" while doing what she does best... . 

 If you can read the Bat's mind you would hear "But I'm still gonna kill you" cuddles!  

4 hours ago, Crw said:

Damn! I love this new pretty badass and sexy look of Adrea way more ^_^ 
Great job ^_^
 

Someone like the bad chicks!   

14 minutes ago, Jayomms said:

 If you can read the Bat's mind you would hear "But I'm still gonna kill you" cuddles!  

The Bat just wants to be taken seriously.  It's not HIS fault he was born as a cute flier!  

6 hours ago, djregs said:

6 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Wow! She looks gorgeous. This hairstyle and color suites her better than red. If only Malicija would follow her example.

Eira's never been a red-head, but she is kinda cute.  Hopefully we'll see more of her in the future.

Malicia : « He wasn't thinking she was Eira. He was very mistaking her for someone else.  »

2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « He wasn't thinking she was Eira. He was very mistaking her for someone else.  »

That's what hard about the pronoun game... :-(  

10 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Wow! She looks gorgeous. This hairstyle and color suites her better than red. If only Malicija would follow her example.

 

As for the story: it is greatly done. Playing with lights also makes better effect. All compliments. By the way, I found my new love among your girls

 

 

> Exactly. I love her too.   And Trilog, although being rarely right about many things, is right about this one.  

Nice story Dj. Love that sex outfit, hairstyle and boots.  

Great job! Really like some of the outfits used in this entry  

11 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> Exactly. I love her too.   And Trilog, although being rarely right about many things, is right about this one.  

Nice story Dj. Love that sex(y) outfit, hairstyle and boots.  

Thanks Eva!  You're referring to Eira right?  Not me?  

5 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Great job! Really like some of the outfits used in this entry  

Thanks Alter!  Is it weird that I still want to find more?  

13 minutes ago, djregs said:

Thanks Alter!  Is it weird that I still want to find more?  

The quest of finding good outfits is endless. 

4 hours ago, djregs said:

Thanks Eva!  You're referring to Eira right?  Not me?  

 

> Sorry,  but that's true. Girls always have slight advantage for me before guys. MY PRINCE is exception.

5 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

> Sorry,  but that's true. Girls always have slight advantage for me before guys. MY PRINCE is exception.

Man! Here I thought I got a compliment on my outfit, hairstyle, AND Boots.   

I think Adrea should keep her new look ?

On 11/10/2019 at 10:55 PM, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « He wasn't thinking she was Eira. He was very mistaking her for someone else.  »

You've right Trilog. I haven't notice her name is Eira. I thought it was Andreja. damn! But, she is still hot. Djreg's candidates for my LL harem just expanded. So far I counted his 4 girls in my harem.  

6 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

I think Adrea should keep her new look ?

Monster!  That girl loves her Red-Hair!  How could you even say that!   

4 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

You've right Trilog. I haven't notice her name is Eira. I thought it was Andreja. damn! But, she is still hot. Djreg's candidates for my LL harem just expanded. So far I counted his 4 girls in my harem.  

They don't consent to joining your harem.  But, I mean,... you can join their Harem.

2 minutes ago, djregs said:

Monster!  That girl loves her Red-Hair!  How could you even say that!   

 

They don't consent to joining your harem.  But, I mean,... you can join their Harem.

Hahahahahahaha. They can be in two harems, yors and mine as long none of them is red like Malicija  

6 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

You've right Trilog. I haven't notice her name is Eira. I thought it was Andreja. damn!

Malicia : « Tirloque very though it too. But if you say that, she'd gonna get mad at you 'cause of her hair.  »

2 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Hahahahahahaha. They can be in two harems, yors and mine as long none of them is red like Malicija  

Malicia : « A place for luckasto people wouldn't be called a harem, but an asylum, you see ?  »

By the Divines, your Rose and Cubie duo is simply adorable! They really deserve their own spin-off adventure. ☺️ You took two inanimate (technically) objects and managed to give them so much personality and dialogue without either of them being able to talk. That takes a lot of creativity.

Your dialogues are as wonderful and humorous as ever ( "hot single ladies in my area" - ah, that never gets old...and seriously, who falls for that? ??) I can't wait to see where this masterful and totally evil plan will lead. ?

Great job! ?

1 hour ago, Devianna said:

By the Divines, your Rose and Cubie duo is simply adorable! They really deserve their own spin-off adventure. ☺️ You took two inanimate (technically) objects and managed to give them so much personality and dialogue without either of them being able to talk. That takes a lot of creativity.

 

Your dialogues are as wonderful and humorous as ever ( "hot single ladies in my area" - ah, that never gets old...and seriously, who falls for that? ??) I can't wait to see where this masterful and totally evil plan will lead. ?

 

Great job! ?

Thanks Devianna!  A Rose and Cubie adventure WAS an option on the questionnaire I put together to do this, ended up not being the way people voted.  No worries!  They'll have a mini adventure here in THIS story.  

I was wondering who was going to comment on the "Hot Single Ladies"-Guy!  I was a little disappointed when people didn't get that at first, especially on this site!  Glad you got it!  ????????

Adrea:  Strange Part is... I didn't even use magic on that guy.  I just said there were hot single ladies in the area and he ran out screaming.  

15 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « A place for luckasto people wouldn't be called a harem, but an asylum, you see ?  »

From my understanding of the slang here <<Which mind you is very horrible>>, you could find these people in bars, making loud noises at 2 am in the morning, and driving 10 MPH(kph) under the speed limit in your lane.  

Ohh dear, plot thickens.

Andrea's goth gf adventures and deeds continues ?

I like Rose and the Cube, they are cute ?

Great work