I am literally new to both making mods and writing them. So I would REALLY love some feedback and opinions from every single point of perspective one could have regarding this project. I need gameplay, story writing, choerence, lore adherence, literally ANY form of feedback on how realistic what I'm doing is and if it makes sense.

Slave Island (Fetish Galore)

Prerequisites (aka, short list of content, and stuff that needs to be implemented)
Spoiler because some of these become outright vile degen.

1. Intro

You hear rumors of strange activity happening around Skyrim. Women are disappearing in the middle of the night, it is said that tarp covered carts are seen moving outside of cities in the middle of the night, seemingly untroubled by the guards. Someone said they spent the night watching to see where the carts go, but they went too far to be followed. 

   1.1. Finding a way in

The player can either get kidnapped, give in willingly, or sneak investigate to get in.

      1.1.a. Kidnapped 

Players asked the guards / jarl of whiterun about the kidnappings. Guards tell the player to talk to the jarl. Jarl gives a mini quest to investigate. Ask the people around, nobody knows anything, jarl proposes a set-up, leave all items with jarl and dress the played in rags, make them sit in the market late at night with a guard, player gets kidnapped. Short cutscene of player being carted out, then wake up in cell on island.

      1.1.b. Give in willingly

When talking to jarl, before offering help, say "I'm interested in joining them". Jarl surprised, he will arrange for a carriage, simply go and take the cart outside. Wake up on island at the entrance, have a chat with the guards (some RP like character background) and then be escorted to the cell.

      1.1.c. Investigate solo

Do not talk with the guards or jarl. Ask the villagers but to no avail, camp outside the walls behind the stables, witness the cart move outside, follow the cart... fade to black... teleport to the docks in windhelm, witness slavers moving slaves to the boat, attacking causes kidnap event. After 3 minutes or slave on boat, system message thoughts " It appears that they use the boats to transport the slaves from Skyrim. There has to be a way on those ships ". Player can then just sneak on the ship inside the cargo where they will be for the journey. Fade to black, teleport to island, can now leave the cargo hold and sneak off the ship.

After sneaking out, a big stone keep is present, the road on the left is full of guards, so the player goes right into a lone farmhouse. 

The farmer agrees to help the player with dismantling this operation, and proposes a way inside, sneak in as a slave in disguise, fake brand, fake shackles. 

A. Player refuses and is forcefully enslaved 
B. Player accepts and is lied to. Gets enslaved then fucked.
C. Proposes they follow the miller inside as a hooded apprentice

The go in the next day after resting but get stopped at the entrance, guards ask about the apprentice, miller says he's getting old and needed a hand, they are let trough.
Once inside, the player witnesses the slave city, and a crowd that shapes their path to the right into a blacksmith. Miller brags about his new apprentice, blacksmith takes a closer look, noticed it's a woman, enslaved into crowd fuck. Slave cell.

[My thoughts: I'm considering an optional no-enslavement route here instead of the player just being plain discovered, but I don't know how well it can be tied into the main story]

2. Welcome  to your new life 

Guard walks up to your cell and says "Hello there fresh meat, welcome to your new life. *hehehe*. Before we can get to properly training you, we need you to answer some questions for your identification papers, so you better answer truthfully". [My thoughts: I'm imagining a Warhammer orc talking here]

-- ASK ABOUT PREFERENCES --
This is the part where the mod is configured for the first time. The config is save independent so the guard will also react here if the config already exists by saying "Hold on, were you a slave before? We already have your papers here, dumb slut. To think you'd return willingly".

Allow skipping if mcm config exists already but hasn't been on the island before.
"Skip the small talk orc breath. (Use MCM values)"

[My thoughts: An MCM is provided for people who want to turn mechanics on and off mid game, and it would be something simple like SKSE/SlaveIsland/preferences.ini idk]

Do you love animals? (Pet preference)
* I used to have a cat     (A cat familiar will be given)
* I used to have a dog.   (A dog instead)
* I'm allergic to animals. (No familiar but a statue is provided in the stables)

Do you really love them though? [Bestiality]
* I absolutely fucking love animals [Enable]
* Not like that.                                     [Disable]

Are you afraid of spiders? [Parasites]
* Yes, deathly so.                       [Disable]
* I crush them under my heel. [Enable]

Do you have any allergies? [Heavy Bondage]
* Leather makes me gasp for air.  [Disable]
* Fuck no.                                           [Enable]

Do you fear death? [Bad endings]
* Sovengard awaits me! (if Nord)                                                            [Enable]
* The call of the void is nothing but a whisper to me (Anything else) [Enable]
* I'm too young to die!                                                                                    [Disable]

What's the longest you've held your bladder [Peeing]
* Pshh, I can go for days.            [Disable]
* I think I've wet myself already [Enable]

"Good slave, now, let's get you settled in to your new role." Nearby livestock holder and fire, branded on the breasts with iron *Sigil of Slave City*.
Whore in training on  the back. | Released from device and fucked. Then taken by another guard *bigger build* to the town for a crowd train. If sex level is too low <20 faint, else survive encounter and be taken to the stable where left chained in livestock device.

Wake up morning, name tag attached to breast via ring, generic scribble, property of city, blah blah blah, get explained that this is her home and needs to make 10,000 gold to rank up. Ranks are represented by piercings. 

1. Livestock *nipple*
2. Street whore *nipple*
3. Working whore *nose ring*
4. Jarls whore *clit* - crystals on everything 

[My thoughts: Outfits could use some work here, but I need it to be representative of one's status]

3. Working 

Player can now work to earn the money. Selling out in the bar, asking the shop owners for work *bestiality / live display*, stealing *if caught give ring bell collar, which makes it impossible to steal*. not always paid by costumer 

Street whore can engage directly on the street, gets better payouts, less chance of not being paid. Have a few quests to be done for other whores.

Working whore has real quests that don't involve fucking. Delivery missions but with bondage.

Jarls whore is the deciding ending.

   3.1. Work Events

      3.1.1. Normal

• Tavern work (Prostitution, Threesomes, Cum drinking, Cum suffocation, Drunkness, Gang rape)
  • Working as a barmaid
• Street work (Prostitution via dialogue or solicited)
• Shop work (Becoming a display mannequin, Target practice dummy?, Point A-to-B delivery while bound)

      3.1.2 Bestiality

• Shop work (Fucking the shop-owners dog, Horses from the stable, Spider basement, Spriggan cave with fish [Like in Balazar's Bitch])
• Random horse on the loose
• This dog really loves you (and follows you everywhere you go for a while)
• Werewolf event at night
• Are falmer beasts? Falmer invasion (bad dream)
• idk... need more ideas

      3.1.3 Parasites

• Fucked by chaurus for eggs farmers
• Dwemer ruin under city
  • Has an ancient entity trapped inside a glass jar
    • HERMEUS MORA? Small little tentalce thing you can shove inside yourself
  • You're now Hermeus Mora's little knowledge bitch, and will be reshaped to better suit him, dragonborn...
• Body transformation
  • Ovaries replaced to only birth eggs and seekers
  • Eventually womb replaced - Purple decal applied to indicate abnormal womb status
  • Breast infestation (+growth, will need to comply with OBodyNG) - Decal or veins pop out more.
• Eyes turn black due to influence, but gain passives along the way!

      [My thoughts: Holy fuck it seems I have a preference huh...]

      3.1.4 Magic

• Scholar research (Bestiality, Atronachs, Mora)
• Gamer Girl Azura cameo, mock player if not dark elf, make them fuck an argonian (nerevar)
• Rogue atronach on the loose! (again...)
• Library trapped with magic creatures.

4. Ending

The players gets friendly with the jarl, gets sent to Skyrim to gather the favor of the jarls there. Making them recognize slave city as its own independent land off of Skyrim. They each have a quest for the player before that can be done.

Once they are all done, player is forcefully returned to the island via summoning magic (from the crystals) to talk with the jarl. 

Ending A. (Good ending)
If the player has picked up the knife during one of the quests and made a pact with the daedra for protection, the jarl can be killed and the player is then sent back to Skyrim. Whiterun jarl thanks the player for killing him, saying that he threatened them into working with him all along. [Island becomes ruins, and turns into a player home?]

Ending B. (Bad ending)
Player requests freedom of passage between the lands. The jarl grants it for outstanding help, but remains a bitch of the city. [Continuation of gameplay]

Ending C. (Evil ending)
Player asks to become the wife of the jarl, amused by the idea, he accepts and now the player can run around the island doing what they want. [Player home] 

Ending D. (Secret ending)
The dragons attack. Alduin has one more in him, and has come to destroy the island and the dragonborn. They kill the jarl, and leave everything in ruin. Player escapes on a boat with the survivors.[Ruined island]

[My thoughts: I'm super on the fence about all of these. They all feel too short, too narrow, and too fast paced. I really want the good ending to be the default one, the one to require the least amount of input, but what is really considered good here.]